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One day my half brother Eric From Oklahoma, visited us He brought with him some fake vomit Just to see who he could disgust! When he was close to my grandma He heaved and dropped it on the floor We laughed at the look on her face First a giggle, then up to a roar! Then we saw her sweeping it up At the trash can she threw it in Even though we said, "It's not real!" She shuffled off, and I saw her grin!

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Date: 4/19/2018 6:00:00 PM
LOL - You are the master, Pat. I had to FAVE this one. I love that sly Grandma. You described the exchanges so very well.
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Date: 4/19/2018 6:13:00 PM
Thank you so much Line, sometimes it amazes me that I can remember something so vividly from so long ago, but can't remember where I put my glasses 15 minutes ago! Go figure!...............80)
Date: 4/19/2018 5:43:00 PM
i'd say you have a cool grandma! a fun poem, pat...
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Date: 4/19/2018 6:11:00 PM
She was and she gave no quarter, figuratively or otherwise!! You might say she was a switch hitter!.........80)
Date: 4/19/2018 5:33:00 PM
lol Pat vomit is one thing I hate dealing with - can deal with poop no problem at all, I guess I write enough of it lol:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 4/19/2018 6:09:00 PM
Well, I guess the Queen of poop is better than the vixen of vomit!!........80(......in some neighborhoods anyway!
Date: 4/19/2018 3:44:00 PM
Light hearted poetry is good for the soul, nice sharing
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Date: 4/19/2018 6:08:00 PM
Well, thank your miss....Dust? I welcome all comments! Have a great day!