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The Last Journey

The world dims to a standstill in shouting incoherencies the fluttering heart spew, clinching on today through the vagaries of inertness, and seeking liberty, he sings the song of life. Then the finality of death. And Agni's dance. The soul ascends from the smouldering cinders gradually dying and strives for salvation in aether, becoming one with the universe, as the universe was always him. Fifteen days of mourning. Eight opinions. Five brahmins to feed. Twelve pieces of jewelry to melt. Fish to eat. Dhoti to wear. Lassi to drink. Judgment to fear. On the sixteenth day, a completion is attained, and things return to normalcy. --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Date: 09 / 01 / 2017

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Date: 6/16/2017 10:47:00 AM
A very beautiful written poem,I really like reading it, It would be difficult to you to write as English isn t your first language, I m from Pakistan and it s always difficult for me to write a poem, however I m new on this site and would really appreciate if you could find time to read my poems and give your honest reviews about them, and at last what s your age bud, I m 15 years old
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Date: 1/24/2017 6:12:00 PM
Hi Tamal, What a well written write. Congratulations on your fine win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
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Tamal Kundu
Date: 1/25/2017 3:01:00 AM
Thanks, Alexis!

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