The Last Journey

The world dims to a standstill in shouting
incoherencies the fluttering heart spew, clinching
on today through the vagaries of inertness, 
and seeking liberty, he sings the song of 
life.

Then the finality of death. 
And Agni's dance. 
The soul ascends from the smouldering 
cinders gradually dying and strives for salvation
in aether, becoming one with the universe, 
as the universe was always him.

Fifteen days of mourning. Eight opinions. 
Five brahmins to feed.
Twelve pieces of jewelry to melt. 
Fish to eat. 
Dhoti to wear. 
Lassi to drink. 
Judgment to fear.

On the sixteenth day,
a completion is attained,
and things return to normalcy. 




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Date: 09 / 01 / 2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Ajmal Avatar
June 16, 2017 at 10:47 AM
A very beautiful written poem,I really like reading it, It would be difficult to you to write as English isn t your first language, I m from Pakistan and it s always difficult for me to write a poem, however I m new on this site and would really appreciate if you could find time to read my poems and give your honest reviews about them, and at last what s your age bud, I m 15 years old
Y. Avatar
January 24, 2017 at 6:12 PM
Hi Tamal, What a well written write. Congratulations on your fine win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
Kundu Avatar
January 25, 2017 at 3:01 AM
Thanks, Alexis!
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