The Last Goodbye

The last time I took Pop to the big lake, the wind was so strong,
it nearly blew his wheelchair over, I knew just where to stop...
at the top of the hill, the windiest place!

I left him alone, he just looked out on the lake unblinking,
rewinding moments, that made him who he was.

In days past.....

He told me the story of his best friend in high-school, who wanted
Dad to go along with him duck-hunting on that sunny, warm morning in fall... 
1940, Dad had promised my Mom (not yet married!) he would go with her 
on a picnic in the bluffs along the Mississippi.... so he declined.
From sunshine and 70... to freezing white-out conditions up and down the river,
many lives were lost that day, including my Pop's best friend.... 
the Great Armistice Day Storm lived on in Pop's heart...
Dad went to his friend's funeral.

Or the time.....

 Dad took my Grandpa (Mom's Dad) on the first vacation he had
 ever been on! Grandpa worked until he died...... the Company
he worked for had tricked him, letting him work 29yrs. 11 months,
and 28 days, then firing him two days before his pension would kick-in.
Pop took him fishin' for the first time in his life! bought him a straw fishin' hat too!
Dad kept baitin' his hook and Grandpa caught 6-fish before Dad could cast a line!.... 
Pop called him 6-fish Bumford after that! and us kids weren't allowed to touch
Grandpa's straw-hat from that fishin' trip..... Dad kept it on a hook in his work-room
 in the basement, with the words "Six Fish Bumford...My Best Friend"
 scrawled under it on the wall (I still have it)

In a while, I knew it was time to bring him back......he had finished
looking out on his life....

.......he was ready to go
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Mason Avatar
October 26, 2009 at 2:13 PM
Love this title which encompasses this great write! I can't think of anywhere I would want to visit before I leave ... now this has me thinking ... smile ...
Culverhouse Avatar
October 25, 2009 at 6:01 PM
brought tears to me eyes, love my gramps.
Griffiths Avatar
October 24, 2009 at 6:21 PM
Such a lovely narrative James it is really heartfelt and filled with emotion I loved it. Thank you for your comments Pam.
La France Avatar
October 24, 2009 at 6:15 PM
James this is so beautiful. I just love how you wrote it. Well done. Bravo. And thank you so much for your comment on my poem ... He Brushed The Tears Away... A fragmented memory....
Loving Iii Avatar
October 22, 2009 at 9:03 AM
i too have a father who's ready to go. the part about he pension made my blood boil. he should sue. i'm sure they will compensate him well and award damages. jhl
Devonshire Avatar
October 22, 2009 at 6:28 AM
How shamefully your grandfather's company treated him! But I love this story and the progression of life as seen through your grandpa's perspective. Seems you loved him a lot! Awesome work, Jim. One for my favorites as it addresses a social issue, disposable elders, that has always concerned me. Love you! Carolyn
Strand Avatar
October 22, 2009 at 12:09 AM
Haunting poetry,especially evocative final lines,Jim,thanks for sharing this.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today
Hilliker Avatar
October 21, 2009 at 6:56 PM
That's so touching, I almost cried. Thanks James!
Freeman Avatar
October 21, 2009 at 5:45 PM
An amazing last outlook on life, this is a great tribute to one whom I know you had great respect, admired, and loved very much. James. Recalls to my mind my own dad's life and his passing. Sincerely, Moses
Nunn Avatar
October 20, 2009 at 8:17 PM
Great write, a lot of feeling here Jim...thanks on The Old General Store glad that you like it...Danny
Guzzi Avatar
October 20, 2009 at 5:21 PM
what a great story!! You were lucky with such great family. Please read The Process for me? Light & Love
Kendrick Avatar
October 20, 2009 at 4:22 PM
Good memories of the dad that you loved and also of a grandad. Keep writing. Sara
Chircop Avatar
October 20, 2009 at 2:18 PM
sweet nostalgic memories..brought me a tear.touched i am Jim--Charma
Brown Avatar
October 20, 2009 at 10:05 AM
Oh my James what a lovely memory you have shared with us today. Thank you my friend. Love, Carol
Itticheria Avatar
October 20, 2009 at 8:17 AM
Great memories Jim,the heart beats of three generations,so beautifully presented here.How tragic it was for your grandpa and corporate America still gets away with that.Something to remember for ever well placed in your memory. Best wishes, Chacko
Richards Avatar
October 20, 2009 at 7:40 AM
What a touching memory this place must hold...the story of your Dad, and his connection to how this lake opened his heart enough to share his pain with you......wonderfully told, James. A lovely poem. ~ Carrie
Gorelick Avatar
October 20, 2009 at 7:22 AM
Don't know what to say..beautifully done. I love "six Fish Bumford" and your memories. Well done. BG
Nutter Avatar
October 20, 2009 at 2:54 AM
I feel the pain, the love, and the admiration expressed thru this wonderful write. Beautiful memories preserved thru your talent. Nice piece. A. W. Nutter www.freewebs.com
Delacroix Avatar
October 19, 2009 at 7:46 PM
It is a beautiful narrative, very touching. One can sense the deep affection you have for him. How terrible also about what the company your grandpa worked for, did to him. I enjoyed reading this. Thanks for sharing. Caroline.
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