The Last Goodbye

The last time I took Pop to the big lake, the wind was so strong,
it nearly blew his wheelchair over, I knew just where to stop...
at the top of the hill, the windiest place!

I left him alone, he just looked out on the lake unblinking,
rewinding moments, that made him who he was.

In days past.....

He told me the story of his best friend in high-school, who wanted
Dad to go along with him duck-hunting on that sunny, warm morning in fall... 
1940, Dad had promised my Mom (not yet married!) he would go with her 
on a picnic in the bluffs along the Mississippi.... so he declined.
From sunshine and 70... to freezing white-out conditions up and down the river,
many lives were lost that day, including my Pop's best friend.... 
the Great Armistice Day Storm lived on in Pop's heart...
Dad went to his friend's funeral.

Or the time.....

 Dad took my Grandpa (Mom's Dad) on the first vacation he had
 ever been on! Grandpa worked until he died...... the Company
he worked for had tricked him, letting him work 29yrs. 11 months,
and 28 days, then firing him two days before his pension would kick-in.
Pop took him fishin' for the first time in his life! bought him a straw fishin' hat too!
Dad kept baitin' his hook and Grandpa caught 6-fish before Dad could cast a line!.... 
Pop called him 6-fish Bumford after that! and us kids weren't allowed to touch
Grandpa's straw-hat from that fishin' trip..... Dad kept it on a hook in his work-room
 in the basement, with the words "Six Fish Bumford...My Best Friend"
 scrawled under it on the wall (I still have it)

In a while, I knew it was time to bring him back......he had finished
looking out on his life....

.......he was ready to go

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 10/26/2009 2:13:00 PM
Love this title which encompasses this great write! I can't think of anywhere I would want to visit before I leave ... now this has me thinking ... smile ...
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Date: 10/25/2009 6:01:00 PM
brought tears to me eyes, love my gramps.
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Date: 10/24/2009 6:21:00 PM
Such a lovely narrative James it is really heartfelt and filled with emotion I loved it. Thank you for your comments Pam.
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Date: 10/24/2009 6:15:00 PM
James this is so beautiful. I just love how you wrote it. Well done. Bravo. And thank you so much for your comment on my poem ... He Brushed The Tears Away... A fragmented memory....
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Date: 10/22/2009 9:03:00 AM
i too have a father who's ready to go. the part about he pension made my blood boil. he should sue. i'm sure they will compensate him well and award damages. jhl
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Date: 10/22/2009 6:28:00 AM
How shamefully your grandfather's company treated him! But I love this story and the progression of life as seen through your grandpa's perspective. Seems you loved him a lot! Awesome work, Jim. One for my favorites as it addresses a social issue, disposable elders, that has always concerned me. Love you! Carolyn
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Date: 10/22/2009 12:09:00 AM
Haunting poetry,especially evocative final lines,Jim,thanks for sharing this.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today
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Date: 10/21/2009 6:56:00 PM
That's so touching, I almost cried. Thanks James!
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Date: 10/21/2009 5:45:00 PM
An amazing last outlook on life, this is a great tribute to one whom I know you had great respect, admired, and loved very much. James. Recalls to my mind my own dad's life and his passing. Sincerely, Moses
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Date: 10/20/2009 8:17:00 PM
Great write, a lot of feeling here Jim...thanks on The Old General Store glad that you like it...Danny
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Date: 10/20/2009 5:21:00 PM
what a great story!! You were lucky with such great family. Please read The Process for me? Light & Love
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Date: 10/20/2009 4:22:00 PM
Good memories of the dad that you loved and also of a grandad. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 10/20/2009 2:18:00 PM
sweet nostalgic memories..brought me a tear.touched i am Jim--Charma
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Date: 10/20/2009 10:05:00 AM
Oh my James what a lovely memory you have shared with us today. Thank you my friend. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/20/2009 8:17:00 AM
Great memories Jim,the heart beats of three generations,so beautifully presented here.How tragic it was for your grandpa and corporate America still gets away with that.Something to remember for ever well placed in your memory. Best wishes, Chacko
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Date: 10/20/2009 7:40:00 AM
What a touching memory this place must hold...the story of your Dad, and his connection to how this lake opened his heart enough to share his pain with you......wonderfully told, James. A lovely poem. ~ Carrie
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Date: 10/20/2009 7:22:00 AM
Don't know what to say..beautifully done. I love "six Fish Bumford" and your memories. Well done. BG
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Date: 10/20/2009 2:54:00 AM
I feel the pain, the love, and the admiration expressed thru this wonderful write. Beautiful memories preserved thru your talent. Nice piece. A. W. Nutter www.freewebs.com
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Date: 10/19/2009 7:46:00 PM
It is a beautiful narrative, very touching. One can sense the deep affection you have for him. How terrible also about what the company your grandpa worked for, did to him. I enjoyed reading this. Thanks for sharing. Caroline.
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