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dawn with bright red hues A long way above the snow Spread from sea to sky In my mind, will not have a cold Yet, pollen is now free to hold When flowers beguile you might sneeze four times in row In spring, hoped I wasn't foaled walking around the yard, I heard nature's grace, the tulips were sprouting.
Written: January 23, 2022 Charlie Hai-Lim-Ku Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Charles Messina

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Date: 3/16/2022 7:12:00 PM
Hi Lasaad, sorry it took so long commenting on this brilliant write. You really connected all the forms together well. My belated Congratulations on your win in my contest. Blessings Charlie
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Date: 3/13/2022 4:21:00 AM
I have read your winning work and was delighted that it is on the winners' list. Way to go. Congrats. Sara. I am having some spring allergy problems and it will only get worse as the oak and pine gets much worse. I take meds but still it can be debilitating.
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Date: 3/11/2022 4:54:00 AM
Allergic? Beautifully written. Congratulations!
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Date: 1/24/2022 6:00:00 AM
A wonderful blend of nature's hues and human interfaces. I like this scenic write, especially the beautiful sprouts in ending line.
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Date: 1/24/2022 1:16:00 AM
I sneeze when I go from a hot environment to a cold one.
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Date: 1/24/2022 12:57:00 AM
Love this one Lasaad, agggghhhhhchoooooo Good luck. Hope you have a great week. Tom
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Date: 1/23/2022 9:55:00 PM
I too get attacks of sneezing, but it could be anytime of year - very amusing and clever!
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