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The Last Forever

The Last Forever The last time I saw her face, with a halted heart, and no love to replace… The last time I kissed her smile, of the adoring art, a Mona Lisa in exile… ~~~ The last time I saw her sleep, a pastoral princess, as I awoke to weep… The last time I heard her speak, with a calliope caress, as words vaporized in a bleak… ~~~ The last time I touched her heart, love still in the ambient air, then slowly ventured to depart… The last time I felt her soul, nothing left to soundly share, except the emptiness of the whole. Nov.27.2018 The last... Poetry Sponsored by: Silent One Placed 1'st...thank you

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 12/9/2018 1:34:00 PM

Winged Warrior! what a wonderful, awesome, touching, loving, mystical love poem. Congratulations are in order, you are certainly a poet of important note. I loved, loved your amazing write. Best wishes and forever good luck in all your future entries for contests. Jennifer.

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 12/5/2018 2:51:00 PM

What a beautiful, touching piece this is, WW! Just outstanding writing! This will surely do great in the contest - good luck, my friend~! Love and hugs. Pandita

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 12/5/2018 10:28:00 AM

Creative ink jet genius on full blast display, Winged Wonder! My Warrior soul brother, you brought the passion w/tragic ease of suffering on each pen stroke. Absolutely stunning poetry. Love and peace always.

Susan Ashley

Date: 12/2/2018 6:40:00 PM

Oh, my wicked bro bro, your emotional poem is so beautifully sad, so full of moving passion. Congratulations on your wonderful first place win. Warmest wishes, love and hugs.. your sissy, Illuminatra the Sane :))

Curtis Moorman

Date: 12/2/2018 7:09:00 AM

WOW ^WW^ You really nailed this one my friend. That poetic muse of yours was working overtime and came up with one of the greatest renderings of 'last' that I have read today --- and I read them all and they all were great, but yours --- WOW!!

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 12/2/2018 12:40:00 AM

Wow. Excellent, sad, passionate and heartfelt. I like this poem, Kai

Eve Roper

Date: 12/1/2018 11:05:00 PM

A wonderful well written deeply moving poem, ^WW^, congratulations on your 1st place win.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 12/1/2018 10:10:00 PM

Once again, your words take flight. The truth is, they always will. Congratulations my friend, on this win. Love and Light. ~ Brandy

Heidi Sands

Date: 12/1/2018 6:21:00 PM

Congratulations for your win WW :)

Charles Messina

Date: 12/1/2018 1:49:00 PM

Excellent WW, you have penned another gem my friend. Congrats on your top win with this poem...just promise me one thing...this won't be THE LAST TIME you write...lol Love & Peace...Charlie

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/1/2018 11:15:00 AM

- Many beautiful and deeply moving poems for this contest ... congratulations on your win, W.W. :) - hugs & happy weekend // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/1/2018 11:15:00 AM

Back with congrats on your top win, WW.

Silent One

Date: 12/1/2018 10:50:00 AM

Touching poem my friend, written so beautifully... Congratulations on your first place in the contest..

Bobby May

Date: 11/30/2018 5:57:00 PM

That's awesome the next time I find a cutie girl I will look you up and you can write me some cool poetry for her! Free of course, lol

Caycay Jennings

Date: 11/29/2018 11:55:00 PM

Beautiful poem, well formatted and delivered loaded with emotion. You did a splendid job with this poem, it touched me. All the best ... CayCay

Brandy Nicole

Date: 11/29/2018 10:56:00 AM

This is beautiful, yet a touch of sadness lingers. A heart aches to feel love in return. Your thoughts always tangle around me. Love and Light. ~ Brandy

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 11/29/2018 6:16:00 AM

Touching the mind and worming the soul! Excellent dear WW!

Lawrence Sharp

Date: 11/27/2018 10:52:00 PM

Very emotive, very well written.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 11/27/2018 7:29:00 PM

Quite a lovely poem; well-penned.

Chris Green

Date: 11/27/2018 4:15:00 PM

Beautifully done my friend. I could feel the longing and the sadness in this. Best of luck in the contest

Heidi Sands

Date: 11/27/2018 3:33:00 PM

This one reaches me deeply WW. Very well written. :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/27/2018 3:31:00 PM

A wonderful write as always..hugging sweet memories of love..well written, WW. Best for a win.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/27/2018 2:51:00 PM

WW, this is so tenderly written. It didn't even occur to me it was for a contest, because it came from your heart. Took me back to my last days with my husband before his first stroke. (Thank you for that.) Amazing writing! Hugs, Carolyn