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The Last Flight Has Left

the Taliban were just waiting for the US troops to leave Afghanistan after 20 years of war they took only days, weeks to take control the people live in fear when they leave home they may never return girls are in hiding children cry mothers weep the men and boys are angry the Canadian flights are finished the US flights are finished the people left behind are unprotected killing mass graves bombing raping the world watches the destruction of a people ____________________ August 31, 2021 Poetry/Free Verse/the last flight has left Copyright Protected, 08-1385-774-31 All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France Written for the Premier contest, Afghanistan sponsor, Kai Michael Newmann, Judged 09/26/2021

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Rama Balasubramanian

Date: 9/3/2021 11:14:00 AM

I don't read newspapers but after reading what you wrote, I feel sad for people of Afghanistan. Well penned as usual. Thanks for all your recent contests and my placement in them. Take care, God bless!

Constance La France
Date: 9/3/2021 2:34:00 PM

Rama, thanks for visiting, yes, such sadness it is almost too unbearable to look at. You are so welcome on your win ~ love and serenity _Constance

Joanna Daniel

Date: 9/2/2021 1:55:00 AM

It's such a shame to humanity, Constance, you have brought it out beautifully:)

Constance La France
Date: 9/3/2021 6:10:00 AM

Jo, thanks for the comment, yes this is a scar on humanity and thank yiu for the compliment ~ love and serenity _ Constance

James Marshall Goff

Date: 9/1/2021 9:15:00 PM

Loved hearing your recitation Tonite, Constance, your soul speaks...james

Constance La France
Date: 9/3/2021 6:11:00 AM

Jim, I am really enjoying the Poeyry Cafe readings, and thanks for the compliment ~ peace and tranquility _ Constance

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 9/1/2021 5:31:00 PM

Hello Constance ... we all must have empathy for the peaceful people in this war torn region, and your poem describes the sadness that awaits them now - thank you Constance - Lindsay

Constance La France
Date: 9/3/2021 6:13:00 AM

Lindsay, thanks for the comment and compliment ~ love and serenity _ Constance

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 9/1/2021 11:31:00 AM

It hurts to read - Can only imagine what they're going through! So so horrific. God bless you, Constance. Love, Gina

Constance La France
Date: 9/1/2021 3:03:00 PM

Gina, thanks for the visit and comment, it is a horrible part of history in the making, when will it end ~ love and serenity _Constance

L Milton Hankins

Date: 8/31/2021 5:24:00 PM

So sad and was so bound to happen whenever it took place. I was deeply moved by your poem, Constance.

Constance La France
Date: 9/1/2021 3:04:00 PM

Milt, thanks for the comment, yes it was bound to happen, I feel so lucky to live in Canada, the land of the free ~peace and tranquility _Constance

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/31/2021 3:32:00 PM

Done poorly…

Constance La France
Date: 9/1/2021 3:05:00 PM

Kim, thanks for the visit, hope you don't mean my poem but the situation ! ~ love and serenity _Constance

Tom Cunningham

Date: 8/31/2021 3:21:00 PM

I'm happy for the people who managed to get out but sad for those left behind, the Taliban are ruthless and follow a twisted ideology. I think they should have started these evacuations months ago when they were in control. Tom

Constance La France
Date: 9/1/2021 3:07:00 PM

Tom, thanks for visiting, yes, I feel sadness for the people under the control of men with as you say a twisted ideology ~ peace and tranquility _Constance

Anthony Biaanco

Date: 8/31/2021 3:20:00 PM

Thank you for this poem Constance..raw and truthful Pray for the Afghan people they are in real trouble..I'm afraid that the American hostage for taliban terrorist swap is about to commence.. Its the Jimmy Carter Iran hostage affair all over again. Godbless us all.

Constance La France
Date: 9/1/2021 3:09:00 PM

Anthony, thanks for the visit, so true the Afghan people are in trouble with no end in sight except death ~ peace and tranquility _Constance

Jan Allison

Date: 8/31/2021 3:10:00 PM

I find it so distressing to even read or listen to the news, your poem tells it as it is, good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx

Constance La France
Date: 9/1/2021 3:10:00 PM

Jan, thanks for visiting, it is very distressing to listen to the news and the horror that is happening ~ love and serenity _Constance