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The Last Dance of the Caravan: A Gypsy Tragedy

She wore a ribbon red as flame, he carved her secret in his name. They danced beneath the open skies, with stars like lanterns in their eyes. The campfire laughed, the horses swayed, the fiddles sang while nightbirds prayed. Their vows were stitched with whispered thread, "Till death," they swore, "no tears to shed." But Fortune's wheel turned rough and wild-- the lawman came to claim their child. A fortune-teller saw too late-- the cards had sealed a crooked fate. They rode like ghosts through iron rain, the mountains swallowed up their pain. Yet dawn betrayed their broken flight-- two shadows fell in dying light. The caravan still hums their song, a love too bright, a loss too strong. And every fire that gypsies light, still weeps for them across the night. Some say when midnight paints the skies, you'll hear their laughter where it lies-- two spirits twirling hand in hand, forever free across the land.

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Date: 4/27/2025 6:59:00 PM
"They rode like ghosts through iron rain..." That's awesome Alesia! They haven't broken love's law, that's what matters. A legacy of love alive in the open secret of Freedom's spirit. I like the romantic love endurance in this well balanced poem Poetess...J.A.B.
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Alesia Leach
Date: 5/1/2025 10:43:00 AM
Thank you, Justin. That line means a lot coming from you--it felt like it carried the whole spirit of the piece. I’m deeply touched by your insight into the enduring love and freedom laced through their story. You always find the soul in a poem, and that’s a rare gift. With gratitude, Alesia
Date: 4/27/2025 6:24:00 PM
Enjoyed!
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Alesia Leach
Date: 5/1/2025 10:42:00 AM
Thank you so much, Kim! I’m glad you enjoyed it--it means a lot. Warm wishes, Alesia

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