The Last Breath

It was the last breath of fresh air
That this old planet had in store
It lingered in a cypress swamp
Where once there was a trillion more

Now fresh air was all recycled
Through new cars and old factories
And humans all wore breathing masks
That were never in histories

It happened there was a gator
That searched for a young mate somewhere
He raised his snout above the swamp
And took a deep, deep breath of air

He let it out in a bellow
A mating call roared out above
And with that last breath of fresh air
Some female gator fell in love



November 25, 2018
For Silent One's contest The Last
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Ashley Avatar
December 6, 2018 at 7:49 PM
A creative take on the contest, Larry. Congratulations on your wonderful win.. ~Susan
Bradfield Avatar
December 6, 2018 at 9:11 PM
Thank you, Susan!!
Roper Avatar
December 1, 2018 at 11:14 PM
A wonderful well written deeply moving poem,Larry, congratulations on your win.
Andresen Avatar
December 1, 2018 at 11:12 AM
- Many beautiful and deeply moving poems for this contest ... congratulations on your win, Larry :) - hugs & happy weekend // Anne-Lise :)
Bradfield Avatar
December 1, 2018 at 1:09 PM
Thank you!
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December 1, 2018 at 11:05 AM
Great take on the contest Larry... Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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