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The Last Breath

It was the last breath of fresh air That this old planet had in store It lingered in a cypress swamp Where once there was a trillion more Now fresh air was all recycled Through new cars and old factories And humans all wore breathing masks That were never in histories It happened there was a gator That searched for a young mate somewhere He raised his snout above the swamp And took a deep, deep breath of air He let it out in a bellow A mating call roared out above And with that last breath of fresh air Some female gator fell in love November 25, 2018 For Silent One's contest The Last

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Date: 12/6/2018 7:49:00 PM
A creative take on the contest, Larry. Congratulations on your wonderful win.. ~Susan
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 12/6/2018 9:11:00 PM
Thank you, Susan!!
Date: 12/1/2018 11:14:00 PM
A wonderful well written deeply moving poem,Larry, congratulations on your win.
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Date: 12/1/2018 11:12:00 AM
- Many beautiful and deeply moving poems for this contest ... congratulations on your win, Larry :) - hugs & happy weekend // Anne-Lise :)
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 12/1/2018 1:09:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 12/1/2018 11:05:00 AM
Great take on the contest Larry... Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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