The Last Birthday Party For Karen

Birthday parties are fun for young teens,
long they've waited: it's time for cheers!
Balloons are dangling from the ceiling,
slow music plays throughout the Hall,
chatting girls woo boys...something
of romantic nature is rapidly brewing;
watchful mothers stand against the wall. 
Where's Karen? Everybody starts worrying; 
somebody runs outside, " She's coming! "
A sigh of relief runs across delighted faces.

The door swings open, Karen in a wheelchair
appears, it's a vision of a ghost much too fair: 
sunken eyes, shaved head that shows her skull;
all the gests greet her, she used to be a doll!
Karen waves at them, perceiving sad glances;
she expected to see more cheerful faces...
searching inside, she feels great sadness
instead of deep sympathy for her illness.

And as planned the party goes on all noon,
cheer returns on Karen's pale face, she forgets
insidious thoughts that battle inside; after all it's
her birthday party and she wants to have fun!
Mark comes forward with a boyish shyness,
and invites her to dance: it's her favorite song,
and that makes her vibrate with life's gladness;
although it's brief, it couldn't be more thrilling! 
  

Written on 2/ 7/ 2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Scars Avatar
June 18, 2016 at 2:49 PM
Andrew, congrats on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest :)-luloo
Rycroft Avatar
February 13, 2016 at 4:47 AM
A very good poem x congrats x
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February 11, 2016 at 10:15 PM
Andrew, Congrats in Nayda's "Birthday Party win." Love LINDA
Grammatico Avatar
February 11, 2016 at 8:48 AM
Beautiful treatment of a difficult subject, Andrew.
A. Sharma Avatar
February 11, 2016 at 4:29 AM
Great pen Andrew..congrats on ur awesome first place win!
Gentry Avatar
February 11, 2016 at 4:18 AM
Congratulations on your win! A great poem for a sad subject...
Roper Avatar
February 10, 2016 at 8:31 PM
Andrew, heartfelt write , congratulations on your win!
Turner Avatar
February 10, 2016 at 8:09 PM
Andrew, Congratulations on your winning write. It is a very emotional poem to say the least but it well written.
Johnson Avatar
February 10, 2016 at 6:12 PM
So sad Andrew and so well done. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
Richards Avatar
February 10, 2016 at 6:02 PM
So touching, this poem, and many folks will certainly, and unfortunately know too well, how heart wrenching, and yet beautiful such a celebration can be. Well done, Andrew. :) Beautiful ...
Gorelick Avatar
February 10, 2016 at 5:19 PM
Really nice. Congrats...BG
Allison Avatar
February 10, 2016 at 5:17 PM
Such a moving write Andrew many congrats on your top spot:-) hugs Jan xx
Negron Flores Avatar
February 10, 2016 at 5:10 PM
Congratulations on the first placement of the contest Andrew
Allison Avatar
February 7, 2016 at 11:59 AM
The imagery is so so vivid Andrew a heartbreaking write:-( hugs Jan xx
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