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The Lake of Fire

flaming inferno you do not want to go there ~ unquenchable thirst where the worm dies not devil and his angels reign ~ body, soul destroyed chasm away from God the realm of utter darkness ~ torment forever 27th March 2023 For Robert James Ligouri's "Hell haiku" contest

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Daniel Turner

Date: 3/29/2023 5:41:00 AM

Congratulations, Joanna. Nice job:)

Alexis Y.

Date: 3/27/2023 8:42:00 PM

Hi Jo, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your win:-) Alexis

Christuraj Alex

Date: 3/27/2023 8:38:00 PM

"torment forever" - Beautifully said using classic images. Congratulations>

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 3/27/2023 7:45:00 PM

Dismal Jo. Congratulations on your win! :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/27/2023 7:01:00 PM

Unquenchable thirst…many don’t consider. Still the worst will be no longer having the mercies of God. Congratulations, Joanna!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/27/2023 4:45:00 PM

you took the literal definition and flew with it. I wish I knew what he wanted. I was thinking along the lines of Marvel comics. Good job. it will be interesting to see who wins. Everyone is doing so great with these!

Alexis Y.

Date: 3/27/2023 9:39:00 AM

Hi Jo, Scary but true descriptions of hell, in your well-written string of haikus. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day-Alexis

Heidi Sands

Date: 3/27/2023 7:50:00 AM

Great descriptions. Well done Jo :)

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 3/27/2023 7:01:00 AM

It’s to be hoped one doesn’t end up in the lake of fire Joanna. Wonderful Haiku’s… Belle

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/27/2023 5:09:00 AM

where the worm dies not--chasm away from God the realm of utter darkness ~ torment forever... aptly evocative of the contest theme. Splendid haiku poems, Jo.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/27/2023 4:08:00 AM

As you’ve said. People joke of what they know not. The greatest loss is of God and his grace.