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The Knight And His Lance

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Unusual unorthodox rhyming scheme. I hate conforming to rules.

Hello, my final words, sucked into a snow swirl but I stutter and look up, and see wings rapidly take off and flutter, from a cloudy cup Tell me darkest secrets of the black butterfly that has came close to death. We don't need another chance but the cherished memories, of a knight and the lance, his lady and last breaths.

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