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The Kite

Am I the only one to think that a kite is such a sad thing? Flimsy...frail... never really free, forever tied to a string Yes, it can soar indeed, so high, with the wind taking it places, almost making it forget, just enjoying the wind rushing through, lighthearted The wind drops, then it gets snared among tree branches maybe, or perhaps stuck on a roof or elsewhere with its string all tangled and knotted, almost impossible to untangle if made with paper, it should be lucky to still be intact, with nary a tear more often than not, it gets ditched in the trash, the price to pay for its momentary freedom Sometimes, though perhaps a rarity these days, there is that boy who makes that kite from scratch, whittles the sticks himself, painstakingly forming that frame, creating that kite with love So when it does get all tangled up, that boy still tries so hard to fix it, to make it new... never minding the cuts he gets in the process-- That string not meant to tie down that kite, but a lifeline to the boy But like I said, that must be a rare thing these days... For I am one to think that a kite is such a sad thing... Flimsy...frail... never really free, forever tied to a string ** There are many of you who have helped me in my journey in writing, & my heartfelt smiley thanks to all of you but I'd also like to give thank you hugs and smiles to Chris D. Aechtner ^_^ I distinctly remember asking you about Sijo, wow when was that? 2 years ago? Back then, I knew I asked the right person--& from there, you've helped bring to light (& helped me appreciate) a lot of other writing forms, just talking about those forms was a blast, just you sharing some of what you've been learning along the way (& believe me, I've learned even a thing or two! can I just say this? I bet you'd make an awesomely cool teacher :D)-- from sijo, to limericks, to sonnets, to haiku and kimo, to than-bauk to that Grook! ook! Being mainly a free-verse writer, you've helped me diversify & that means a lot to me. So my heartfelt thank you for being there in my poetic journey, and for being my friend :D oops. that wasn't a couple of lines?! lol

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Date: 4/16/2012 10:00:00 PM
A wonderful journey with your Kite a nice different perspective, and congratulations on your winning place xx
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Date: 4/16/2012 3:59:00 PM
well done on your placement here Nikko..)
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Date: 4/16/2012 1:02:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Gwen's "Lets Go Fly A Kite" contest Nikko. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/15/2012 7:16:00 PM
i never really thought of a kite as a sad thing, but i like the way your poem made me consider that possibility. nicely done!
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Date: 4/15/2012 6:47:00 PM
I loved the question you pondered in your kite poem, Nikko...It must be a cumbersome task to be a kite...Your poem made myself and the other judges take a completely different look at the rollercoaster life of a kite..lol...REally enjoyed the effort you put into this one and the dedication to Mr. Aechtner at the bottom...He is deserving of these comments. I feel the same way. Bless you and keep these great insightful writes a comin'! Love, Gwendolen
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Date: 11/13/2011 11:00:00 PM
Hello!It is an exceptional thinking.Great.I have also penned on kite.Hope you read it.
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Date: 10/7/2011 2:28:00 PM
I will write a poem about this BIG BOOK OF WON DERS...or Ripley's Year in Review...I love your new bat banner on your blog...anymore cool bat stories? do share.........
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Date: 9/20/2011 11:08:00 AM
oi! lol you got my new ,,,,package ..please tell me yes,,,, hahahhahah new name... hahhahah i know that chocolate comment any where,,,,,, hi,,,, ne back soon,,,, Skat
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Date: 9/20/2011 11:09:00 AM
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Date: 8/25/2011 8:50:00 AM
Wonderful poem.Very nicely you have used Kite as a metaphor.Thanks for your comment at my Arm Chair poem.Being an Elect.Engg.AC/DC always mean Currents to me.Wanted to write about these.But it is hard to mix technology with poetry......Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 8/24/2011 9:06:00 PM
Excellent metaphor for life. We are all but frail and flimsy in this world, sometimes getting snarled in life's momentary lapses. Awesome win for you! I returned your email, hon. My chef skills are limited. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/24/2011 6:17:00 AM
brave .. sensitive.. boy oh boy! creativity knows no bounds. Very nice write, nikko!
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Date: 8/24/2011 2:06:00 AM
i know this will win if ever it were entered in a contest, nikks... still pining for one magical swirl with a kite; no one does it better than my dad ( handmade).. but the deeper meaning of this is what makes me reel... CONGRATS to the max with huggs! :)
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Date: 8/23/2011 11:29:00 PM
This is one of the most amazing poem in this contest Nikko. Loved it. Many congrats for this win.
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Date: 8/23/2011 7:50:00 PM
congratulations on your win! very entertaining thoughts about kites :)
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Date: 8/23/2011 3:59:00 PM
Leave it to you, to be so unique, and beautifully poetic in your perfect way!! Congrats, dear Nikko !!
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Date: 8/23/2011 3:52:00 PM
Congrats Nikko sweet friend on your awesome win in the contest with this extraordinary entry luv.. amazing as usual...we are enjoying hot Florida sunshine..oh luv it ..luv..
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Date: 8/23/2011 2:08:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in Debbie Guzzi's "AC DC AD BC" contest Nikko. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/23/2011 1:53:00 PM
Congrats on your win in this fine contest..Sara
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Date: 8/23/2011 6:45:00 AM
Soft,,,flowing....like a warm, breezy afternoon. Good luck in Deb's contest. Gwendolen
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Date: 8/19/2011 2:11:00 PM
Makes me tie this into our own lives as we get strung up on insecurities and wiles of daily living. A great verse that ties in with aspects of our lives.
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Date: 8/17/2011 8:52:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your creative poetry with us Nikko. I enjoyed reading it this morning. I will be back another time to read more. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/17/2011 8:33:00 AM
I love the contrast Missy.. To me a kite bring some kind of happiness and joy to people in general and yet you wrote from a different perspective.. Just shows you that sometimes the joy others exert from something can mean sadness for others.. Okay that is my two cents lol.. Enjoyed this gem *mwahugs*
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Date: 8/17/2011 12:03:00 AM
wow, NIkko, this is great!! I love how you came back to your first thoughts when you put on the finishing stanza. And the way you touched on the rare kite treated with love. WAs this for the sad contest?? I think it would work for that one? You are in top form with this poem, sweetie.
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Date: 8/16/2011 7:28:00 PM
Insightful poem that gives the reader something to ponder. Keep up the good writing. Thank you for your kind comment. Karen
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Date: 8/16/2011 6:39:00 PM
Well, yet another write to share with my Noah tonight ! His first "kite", rest now, on his wall in his bed-room, for the last 6 yrs. ! Awesome write dear poet...and I thought only Noah and I cared ! Have a blessed week Nikko...much love, james
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