The Kissing Ground

Sophie's sweat 
landscapes
the claret red horizon
thick serum
trickles 
from a Sickroom -
a death ward

where cracked knuckles
spatter the fjords 
moistening the planks;
bathing the laths of anxiety
‘neath 
marquis de sade stumps

Norwegian expressions of death -
agoraphobia
murdering actuality;
the Dance of Life
rapidly burns
as a funeral pyre of Ashes are
seized from
your tribe’s headstone

the stench of brother’s legacy
replaces
a protected breath
and a Dead Mother can 
descry muted 
caterwauls 
between
the Clock and the Bed

the two guardians of quietus
merely exit
this clotted bridge
contemptuously -
in soured and 
staled 

delight
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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July 31, 2012 at 11:42 PM
JOHN, stopping by to read a couple of poems. CONGRATULATIONS!! :-) with your featured poem of the week. Goodnight~ LUV~ PD
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December 20, 2010 at 4:04 PM
Congratulations, John, on your win in the contest. Dan C
Freeman Avatar
December 20, 2010 at 8:53 AM
Congratulations John on your excellent pom's honored place. Agape, Moses
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December 1, 2010 at 12:49 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
Mac Donald Avatar
November 26, 2010 at 9:49 AM
Congratulations John! Nineth place, nine angels, nine muses...in reality a very fine number! I am always captivated by your subject and presentation. No bells and cymbals, no sugary confection; it just is. Great use of imagery and symbols...you do write amazing well!! Best to you, John! Mikki
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November 25, 2010 at 11:14 PM
I am so happy for your on this magnificent win in the Poetry Soup Contest. A dramatic poet I do acclaim today with such enthusiasm and warmth: and that poet is you John! Your poem conveys mystery and suspense like a scene from a thriller! Big congratulations on your amazing win! Have a Happy Thanksgiving. :) God loves you as we all do at Poetry Soup! Peace and love, Andrew.
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November 25, 2010 at 3:22 AM
Heck - Many congrats on winning coveted spot in contest bringing you on verge of hat-trick ..... Happy Thanksgiving.... Luv & Best wishes.....Hitendra Mehta
Foster Avatar
November 24, 2010 at 9:46 PM
Powerful images portrayed, drama and mystery is what I feel. congratulations John. regards Margaret
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November 24, 2010 at 5:58 PM
Hi John. I am not entirely familiar with this form.But I can see by your words and images it is indeed very dramatic.I think you have a very creative imagination and are also skilfull,a combination that made you a winner.Congratulations.Love June (Sylvia)
K. Avatar
November 24, 2010 at 1:51 PM
Super congrats on your win with this very interesting piece, John! :)-- nikko :)
Richards Avatar
November 24, 2010 at 10:45 AM
Super congratulations, John, on this winning PS contest entry!!! And also for the Soup's mention at the top of this winner's chart....so well deserving are you!....of course you have always been one of my favorites!!
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November 24, 2010 at 7:51 AM
Well done, John! Big congratulations to you for this fine placement in the soup contest! Love, Carolyn
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November 23, 2010 at 5:43 PM
Awesome win, John. A big congratulations to you. Luv, Andrea ps Did your scene in that one series ever get filmed?
Brown Avatar
November 23, 2010 at 10:31 AM
Congratulations on your win John in The PoetrySoup International Contest with your amazing poetry. Love, Carol
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November 23, 2010 at 6:20 AM
Super congrats John on your big win in the P.S. contest on site with this brilliant entry my friend.. enjoy a special place of honor today and enjoy a wonderful Thanksgiving as well with luv..
Docherty Avatar
November 22, 2010 at 10:12 PM
Warmest congratulations, loved your poem it made for a great read, Anna-Marie.
Ahmad Avatar
November 22, 2010 at 9:55 PM
Congrats bro, this one rocks! Nice one
Iyer Avatar
November 22, 2010 at 9:46 PM
Congrats for being among the winners, Cheers i take inspiration from you cheers suresh
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November 10, 2010 at 4:57 AM
Super congrats John on having two poems selected in the first round of competition in the P.S. contest luv.. good luck in the next phase for both of them...
Docherty Avatar
May 27, 2009 at 6:44 AM
My, the turn of phrases you use never cease to amaze and awaken the mind to colourful picture, painting the scene as you go and playing out the part of those involved...I often wonder where this muse comes from? Thanks for positioning my write in your contest, humbled...Smiles, Anna-Marie.
Richards Avatar
March 16, 2009 at 12:19 PM
Wow...somehow I missed when the results for this contest were in...but this is a winning entry! Congratulations...I'm still reading and trying to figure it all out! ~ Carrie
Shango Avatar
March 12, 2009 at 10:44 AM
Magnificient imageries, wrapped in the sweet mysteries of words, excellent.
Biffany Avatar
March 12, 2009 at 12:29 AM
John, I think you are one of the more amazing writers on Poetry Soup. I am delving into your work with awe and wonder. Thank you for your kind words on my recently featured poem. Randy
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March 6, 2009 at 9:32 AM
The last stanza must reflect the attitude of the solider now, though he has his "quietus"....is it bittersweet. He knows about the others who died before him, also. I found this very deep, and breathtaking in a most horrific way. Kudos for your genius, whether I am right or not! Best wishes, Sara:)
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March 6, 2009 at 9:30 AM
I have read this poem several times. I have been reading it, then leaving it alone, then reading it again. This is what I think it means: it's a war poem of some consequence..."marquis de sade" was a French soldier...."agoraphobia murdering actuality" presents the disorder of a soldier to assimiliate back into real life, "the stench of brother’s legacy" means another soldier has died...and the last stanza..."a quietus" is a discharge, or a release, is it not?
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