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The Kiss

His girl’s amorous, uninhibited. She flirted with his friends turning them red though she was all in, never gibbeted. He’d been away a stretch, her arms outspread. Her lips like sunrise sky — bright, bittersweet. Her lashes are sun rays dyed with black ink. The pounding of pavement — his eager feet stumbled which she thought cute, gave him a wink. She dived right in and sucked his bottom lip. There probably was tongue, a lover's swish. His friends talked about it. It made them flip. If one of them had knocked first, get his wish. And talking them through it (on his last nerve), his girlfriend’s kiss was not first come first serve. 1/13/2021

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Date: 1/16/2021 7:25:00 PM
These young women are pretty aggressive these days. Liked this one outing them.
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Date: 1/16/2021 6:01:00 PM
Kim, precise and true, everywhere youth gathers every day.so well penned for the truth it is!
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Date: 1/16/2021 2:24:00 AM
Good one! :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/16/2021 9:32:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 1/14/2021 6:33:00 PM
Such imagery! Love your way with words, Kim. It's a Fave for me.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/15/2021 3:48:00 AM
Thank you, my friend!
Date: 1/14/2021 5:26:00 PM
Playing with fire, a person could get burned... All seems well though... Very neatly put together, Kim. Held my attention; that's for sure!! ~ gw
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/14/2021 5:37:00 PM
Thank you! :)
Date: 1/14/2021 9:45:00 AM
This could be called The Kisses :) ~ ~
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/14/2021 11:40:00 AM
Hmm...one kiss for one man. ;)

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