The King of Beasts

The lion lay hidden
from the noonday heat
thick scrub surrounding
only movement a flick
of an ear as he listens
tuned to all around him

Lazily he stretches
tail slowly swishing
he draws himself up
standing full height
he now towers above
the small clump of scrub

Making one wonder 
how it so perfectly
gave him camouflage 
impressive as he strides forward

Roaring calling out to his pride
answering distant roars reply
he strolls towards the sound
king of all his surrounds

All scatter before him
as they catch his scent
he slowly prowls his lands
not yet time for the hunt
he marks trees as he passes

Letting all know this land
belongs to him alone
climbing a hillock
he stands in silhouette
true king of the beasts

written 03/24/2013

The lion lay still and silent
under the thorn trees patient.
The odd flicker of an ear
as he watches a deer.

Lazily he stretches, tail swishing
at full height he is now standing.
The small clump diminishes now shrunken
the screech and flapping of a startled chicken.

He calls to his pride bellowing
roars across the savannah echoing.
First he claims then he challenges 
his rivals soon scatter as he plunges.  

In silhouette he stands against the landscape
a final series of roars, as they escape.
Magnificent beast in his full prime
this king continues to rule for a time. 

written 03/15/2015

contest: The Makeover
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Wolf Avatar
October 8, 2016 at 1:17 AM
You are an amazing writer Shadow, I thought I'd go back to your first entry, and am glad I did /|\
Hamilton Avatar
October 8, 2016 at 2:13 AM
drawing on personal experiences Rick I lived in East Africa for 10 years from 8 - 18 magical childhood hugs
A   Avatar
April 26, 2015 at 7:15 PM
Shadow, you are so kind and honest. thank you for the reply.. LINDA
Lindley Avatar
April 19, 2015 at 2:02 PM
Sorry that I am so late on the congrats, just recently found out the contest was finalized.. Big congrats on your win!!
A   Avatar
April 18, 2015 at 5:31 PM
Hello Shadow, this is a nice and wonderful win.. Linda
Hamilton Avatar
April 18, 2015 at 5:45 PM
ty Linda I think I still prefer the original. hugs
Guzzi Avatar
April 13, 2015 at 7:56 PM
Congrad's on your winning verse! Light & Love
Hamilton Avatar
April 14, 2015 at 6:30 PM
ty Debbie hugs
Lamoureux Avatar
March 3, 2014 at 3:16 PM
You captured the King in all his regal splendor.
Hamilton Avatar
March 3, 2014 at 7:24 PM
1st poem I posted here Rick ty hugs
A  Avatar
July 18, 2013 at 10:37 PM
Shadow, :-). Congratulations, with your awesome HIT in the poet destroyer's contest. Hugs & Hugs** SKAT
Hamilton Avatar
July 19, 2013 at 4:43 PM
hiya Skat this is one of my favourites glad you like it Shadow x smiles
Gildersleeve Avatar
July 15, 2013 at 9:23 AM
Linda you have described the King of the jungle perfectly. I so enjoyed the image you've conveyed in your verse. Congratulations on a fine win. Warm Smiles, Connie
Hamilton Avatar
July 15, 2013 at 6:22 PM
hi Connie Ty so much I am glad he came across Shadow x smiles
Dietrich Avatar
July 14, 2013 at 1:42 AM
big congrats for your win with a coolio lion poem!!
Hamilton Avatar
July 15, 2013 at 6:23 PM
Ty Andrea nice of you to read and for congrats Shadow xox
A   Avatar
July 14, 2013 at 12:05 AM
Stopping in with smiles.... :-) :-)... Congratulations, Thank you for taking your time and hooking me up with an awesome OLD # 1 hit... I had a hard time choosing the winners... please enjoy my blog when you have time. Hugs & Hugs.... xox~ LINDA
Hamilton Avatar
July 15, 2013 at 6:25 PM
hi Linda this was 1st poem I posted on Soup glad you still like it I will read your blog Shadow x smiles
Mohammed Avatar
June 7, 2013 at 3:26 PM
I think this poem is right up there with the best.Wonderful stuff my friend.
Hamilton Avatar
June 8, 2013 at 4:48 AM
dear M.M ty like the kitty wonderful comment love Shadow xox
Seal Avatar
June 5, 2013 at 10:15 AM
Hi Linda, congratulations with this wonderful poem, you described the king of the jungle perfectly, well done. Take care, Richard
Hamilton Avatar
June 5, 2013 at 10:48 AM
hi Richard ty I was luckily enough to live over there for ten years so used to see them free and wild they are magnificent ty for reading Shadow
A   Avatar
June 1, 2013 at 8:45 PM
Hi Shadow, congratulations on having your poem Featured this past week. It was nice reading your poem tonight. Goodnight~ Linda
Hamilton Avatar
June 2, 2013 at 4:55 AM
I was amazed and delighted ty for your support and help Shadow
Austin Avatar
May 28, 2013 at 9:54 AM
Enjoyed mucho. I have cats, each one thinking it is a lion. How pitiful. Congrats on the selection. Love, daver
Hamilton Avatar
May 28, 2013 at 11:02 AM
ty Daver yes they do don't they lol I have 3. ty for your comment Linda
A  Avatar
May 25, 2013 at 11:53 AM
A nice winning poem LInda, , your poem is very enjoyable :-) A nice warm welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best in your writings. I hope you find this community to be one of the best. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself? If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please look me up by clicking on my name anytime you're on line. I'm looking forward in becoming your #1 poetry soup fan. Keep me posted every time you post a poem <3 LUV ~SKAT~
Hamilton Avatar
May 25, 2013 at 12:59 PM
hi Skat and ty so much I find people friendly here and am enjoying being here. Finding good inspiration too ty for reading Linda
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May 23, 2013 at 8:40 PM
Congratulations on your well-deserved super win my dear Linda! A marvelous piece with nature's very great & wonderful image as well. I love it! Cheers! love & hugs, Leonora
Hamilton Avatar
May 24, 2013 at 11:42 AM
ty I do a fair amount of nature poems I just love it so much, your comments much appreciated Linda
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May 23, 2013 at 1:34 AM
Congratulations Linda i loved it ...Seren
Hamilton Avatar
May 23, 2013 at 4:31 AM
hi Seren ty so much very happy you like it
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May 22, 2013 at 11:53 PM
I am fascinated by lions and all the big cats...This gem puts me right there (at a safe distance of course) Congratulations, Linda - Tim
Hamilton Avatar
May 23, 2013 at 4:35 AM
I love Africa and its wild life when you know lions it can be safe to approach to around 50 metres not that I would try lol ty Tim
Harper Avatar
May 22, 2013 at 8:25 PM
Linda, wonderful imagery and good characterization of the lion. Enjoyed this poem.
Hamilton Avatar
May 23, 2013 at 4:37 AM
hi Sheri ty fertile imagination I suppose and knowing lions from my time in Africa glad you enjoyed
Delaney Avatar
May 22, 2013 at 4:54 PM
Congratulations Linda Keep on writing and Welcome to the poetry soup Cheers SuZ
Hamilton Avatar
May 23, 2013 at 4:39 AM
hi Suzanne I am happy when scribbling so I am unlikely to stop lol for your welcome tnx Linda
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May 22, 2013 at 12:21 PM
Well done and congrats on your win. Best wishes, S.
Hamilton Avatar
May 22, 2013 at 2:21 PM
ty I only just found out I am astounded ty
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May 22, 2013 at 12:08 PM
- CONGRATULATIONS LINDA! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Hamilton Avatar
May 22, 2013 at 2:22 PM
reeling in amazement ty so much
Posey Avatar
May 22, 2013 at 9:58 AM
Well deserved win!! The King reigns supreme.... Great job.... Jake
Hamilton Avatar
May 22, 2013 at 2:23 PM
hi Jake ty I wasn't expecting it
Johnson Avatar
May 22, 2013 at 9:43 AM
Congratulations on your great win, Linda. Enjoyed your poem. Love, Joyce
Hamilton Avatar
May 22, 2013 at 2:24 PM
hi Joyce ty so much glad you liked it
A   Avatar
May 22, 2013 at 8:13 AM
Congratulations Linda, with your #1 winning poem in the nature contest... I love your poem, mostly i love the nature of the ferocious beast.. a king in the eyes of nature, that is how i viewed this poem. xox~Linda
Hamilton Avatar
May 22, 2013 at 2:29 PM
I don't know what to say ty so much I am amazed you thought it good enough tnx Linda
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