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The King of Beasts

The lion lay hidden from the noonday heat thick scrub surrounding only movement a flick of an ear as he listens tuned to all around him Lazily he stretches tail slowly swishing he draws himself up standing full height he now towers above the small clump of scrub Making one wonder how it so perfectly gave him camouflage impressive as he strides forward Roaring calling out to his pride answering distant roars reply he strolls towards the sound king of all his surrounds All scatter before him as they catch his scent he slowly prowls his lands not yet time for the hunt he marks trees as he passes Letting all know this land belongs to him alone climbing a hillock he stands in silhouette true king of the beasts written 03/24/2013 The lion lay still and silent under the thorn trees patient. The odd flicker of an ear as he watches a deer. Lazily he stretches, tail swishing at full height he is now standing. The small clump diminishes now shrunken the screech and flapping of a startled chicken. He calls to his pride bellowing roars across the savannah echoing. First he claims then he challenges his rivals soon scatter as he plunges. In silhouette he stands against the landscape a final series of roars, as they escape. Magnificent beast in his full prime this king continues to rule for a time. written 03/15/2015 contest: The Makeover

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Date: 10/8/2016 1:17:00 AM
You are an amazing writer Shadow, I thought I'd go back to your first entry, and am glad I did /|\
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Date: 10/8/2016 2:13:00 AM
drawing on personal experiences Rick I lived in East Africa for 10 years from 8 - 18 magical childhood hugs
Date: 4/26/2015 7:15:00 PM
Shadow, you are so kind and honest. thank you for the reply.. LINDA
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Date: 4/19/2015 2:02:00 PM
Sorry that I am so late on the congrats, just recently found out the contest was finalized.. Big congrats on your win!!
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Date: 4/18/2015 5:31:00 PM
Hello Shadow, this is a nice and wonderful win.. Linda
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Date: 4/18/2015 5:45:00 PM
ty Linda I think I still prefer the original. hugs
Date: 4/13/2015 7:56:00 PM
Congrad's on your winning verse! Light & Love
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 4/14/2015 6:30:00 PM
ty Debbie hugs
Date: 3/3/2014 3:16:00 PM
You captured the King in all his regal splendor.
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Date: 3/3/2014 7:24:00 PM
1st poem I posted here Rick ty hugs
Date: 7/18/2013 10:37:00 PM
Shadow, :-). Congratulations, with your awesome HIT in the poet destroyer's contest. Hugs & Hugs** SKAT
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Date: 7/19/2013 4:43:00 PM
hiya Skat this is one of my favourites glad you like it Shadow x smiles
Date: 7/15/2013 9:23:00 AM
Linda you have described the King of the jungle perfectly. I so enjoyed the image you've conveyed in your verse. Congratulations on a fine win. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 7/15/2013 6:22:00 PM
hi Connie Ty so much I am glad he came across Shadow x smiles
Date: 7/14/2013 1:42:00 AM
big congrats for your win with a coolio lion poem!!
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Date: 7/15/2013 6:23:00 PM
Ty Andrea nice of you to read and for congrats Shadow xox
Date: 7/14/2013 12:05:00 AM
Stopping in with smiles.... :-) :-)... Congratulations, Thank you for taking your time and hooking me up with an awesome OLD # 1 hit... I had a hard time choosing the winners... please enjoy my blog when you have time. Hugs & Hugs.... xox~ LINDA
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Date: 7/15/2013 6:25:00 PM
hi Linda this was 1st poem I posted on Soup glad you still like it I will read your blog Shadow x smiles
Date: 6/7/2013 3:26:00 PM
I think this poem is right up there with the best.Wonderful stuff my friend.
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Date: 6/8/2013 4:48:00 AM
dear M.M ty like the kitty wonderful comment love Shadow xox
Date: 6/5/2013 10:15:00 AM
Hi Linda, congratulations with this wonderful poem, you described the king of the jungle perfectly, well done. Take care, Richard
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Date: 6/5/2013 10:48:00 AM
hi Richard ty I was luckily enough to live over there for ten years so used to see them free and wild they are magnificent ty for reading Shadow
Date: 6/1/2013 8:45:00 PM
Hi Shadow, congratulations on having your poem Featured this past week. It was nice reading your poem tonight. Goodnight~ Linda
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Date: 6/2/2013 4:55:00 AM
I was amazed and delighted ty for your support and help Shadow
Date: 5/28/2013 9:54:00 AM
Enjoyed mucho. I have cats, each one thinking it is a lion. How pitiful. Congrats on the selection. Love, daver
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Date: 5/28/2013 11:02:00 AM
ty Daver yes they do don't they lol I have 3. ty for your comment Linda
Date: 5/25/2013 11:53:00 AM
A nice winning poem LInda, , your poem is very enjoyable :-) A nice warm welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best in your writings. I hope you find this community to be one of the best. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself? If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please look me up by clicking on my name anytime you're on line. I'm looking forward in becoming your #1 poetry soup fan. Keep me posted every time you post a poem <3 LUV ~SKAT~
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Date: 5/25/2013 12:59:00 PM
hi Skat and ty so much I find people friendly here and am enjoying being here. Finding good inspiration too ty for reading Linda
Date: 5/23/2013 8:40:00 PM
Congratulations on your well-deserved super win my dear Linda! A marvelous piece with nature's very great & wonderful image as well. I love it! Cheers! love & hugs, Leonora
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Date: 5/24/2013 11:42:00 AM
ty I do a fair amount of nature poems I just love it so much, your comments much appreciated Linda
Date: 5/23/2013 1:34:00 AM
Congratulations Linda i loved it ...Seren
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Date: 5/23/2013 4:31:00 AM
hi Seren ty so much very happy you like it
Date: 5/22/2013 11:53:00 PM
I am fascinated by lions and all the big cats...This gem puts me right there (at a safe distance of course) Congratulations, Linda - Tim
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Date: 5/23/2013 4:35:00 AM
I love Africa and its wild life when you know lions it can be safe to approach to around 50 metres not that I would try lol ty Tim
Date: 5/22/2013 8:25:00 PM
Linda, wonderful imagery and good characterization of the lion. Enjoyed this poem.
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Date: 5/23/2013 4:37:00 AM
hi Sheri ty fertile imagination I suppose and knowing lions from my time in Africa glad you enjoyed
Date: 5/22/2013 4:54:00 PM
Congratulations Linda Keep on writing and Welcome to the poetry soup Cheers SuZ
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Date: 5/23/2013 4:39:00 AM
hi Suzanne I am happy when scribbling so I am unlikely to stop lol for your welcome tnx Linda
Date: 5/22/2013 12:21:00 PM
Well done and congrats on your win. Best wishes, S.
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Date: 5/22/2013 2:21:00 PM
ty I only just found out I am astounded ty
Date: 5/22/2013 12:08:00 PM
- CONGRATULATIONS LINDA! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/22/2013 2:22:00 PM
reeling in amazement ty so much
Date: 5/22/2013 9:58:00 AM
Well deserved win!! The King reigns supreme.... Great job.... Jake
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 5/22/2013 2:23:00 PM
hi Jake ty I wasn't expecting it
Date: 5/22/2013 9:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your great win, Linda. Enjoyed your poem. Love, Joyce
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 5/22/2013 2:24:00 PM
hi Joyce ty so much glad you liked it
Date: 5/22/2013 8:13:00 AM
Congratulations Linda, with your #1 winning poem in the nature contest... I love your poem, mostly i love the nature of the ferocious beast.. a king in the eyes of nature, that is how i viewed this poem. xox~Linda
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 5/22/2013 2:29:00 PM
I don't know what to say ty so much I am amazed you thought it good enough tnx Linda
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