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The Kiln

I can see the potter's hand when looking at your face. Each gentle feature not by man could such a thing create. I watch in awe as you sleep, this cherub from my flesh. A most precious gift he gave to me he knew 'fore she drew breath. I know nothing but to stand rendered in my awe. In this role that I have granted me by God. I wonder eyes how did you see before you saw her face? And heart I wonder how'd you beat 'fore the kiln yielded that day? What the potter's hand had made.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 7/19/2013 4:58:00 PM
This speaks of your faith in a very subtle fashion..Enjoyed reading this evening..Sara
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Date: 6/8/2013 12:09:00 PM
Welcome to this website. You are off to a good start with this entry.
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Date: 6/5/2013 9:16:00 AM
Hi Sheree. Dropping in with a nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. My name is Linda; I’m here to invite you on over to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* please consider my contest* hopefully you find this place to be the comfort zone your writing pen is looking for. If you ever need or want honest feedback on a certain poem let me know. Stop by anytime you like. I’m looking forward in following you and your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy this community; we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend Linda
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Date: 5/26/2013 11:26:00 AM
Fantastic poem. What a wonderful way of looking at a new life and giving the praise where it is due. Welcome
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Date: 5/26/2013 9:28:00 AM
A Masterpiece...thank You ...
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Date: 5/26/2013 5:05:00 AM
A very beautiful heartfelt poem! Welcome to the soup! Kim
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Date: 5/26/2013 2:56:00 AM
Sheree, a enjoyable poem to read. - Welcome to P-Soup-Hope you will get much pleasure from sharing your poems here with us. - Have fun with poetry! - Welcome to read some of my poems. - Have a nice Sunday. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/25/2013 7:35:00 PM
Sheree, I really hope you have more like this in your portfolio. This is magnificently done and immensely enjoyable. I love the one in whom you place your trust....Jake
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Date: 5/25/2013 12:04:00 PM
Sheree, , your poem is very enjoyable :-) A nice warm welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best in your writings. I hope you find this community to be one of the best. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself? If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please look me up by clicking on my name anytime you're on line. I'm looking forward in becoming your #1 poetry soup fan. Keep me posted every time you post a poem <3 LUV ~SKAT~
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