The Killing of One Hundred and Fifty Million Years

another typical day, with feet on the ground
  ordering the hedge to meet my image of trim
  many measured bits fall before the cutting edge
  casual thoughts detach, is there anybody in ?

  then some mental inner disturbance jangles
  with corresponding jig, nerves rip in deeper
  following the run of a stalk, the hang of a sprig
  so prune the untidy and unwelcome creeper

  a movement to the side of my eye is caught
  something is scared, behind dense vegetation
  the fast beating breast of a baby brown bird
  a frantic flutter and then much aggravation

  descends to the pavement in fear driven escape
  panic ruptures in flood, under a half sliced-off wing
  chest partly open, feathers flecked red with blood
  cupped warm in my hand, young life does cling

  grim realisation, fledgling with no hope
  pressure leaking, ebbing from a dying heart
  but then our eyes meet, answers it is seeking
  'where's my mum, when can my flying lessons start?'

  the deed is now done, the light that shone has gone out
  just the salt of my tears at this horrible juncture
  the killing of one hundred and fifty million years
  and this clumsy ape's evolutionary puncture

  undiluted guilt, too much concentration to bear
  to forgive and assuage, soothing rational thought
  replacement anger and even more depressing rage
  bombs target children when careless wars are fought

  imagine that child, in screaming terrified terror
  in mortal trouble, reduced to core instinct base
  an external world has turned your home into rubble
  'where's my mum, why can't I see her familiar face?'

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 11/28/2018 1:48:00 PM
That was like a movie!
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Ian Love
Date: 11/30/2018 4:50:00 AM
thanks for that
Date: 10/28/2018 9:41:00 AM
Hi Ian: I was in awe of this very profound poem that is sending many messages in context. Welcome to the soup, Friend!!
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Ian Love
Date: 10/29/2018 3:44:00 AM
Hi Ralph - thank you for comments
Date: 10/25/2018 7:08:00 AM
I am in utter awe. This is brilliantly rendered, heartbreakingly intense, and profound. Thank you so much for sharing!
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Ian Love
Date: 10/29/2018 3:45:00 AM
Hi Rhona - thank you for your comments
Date: 10/25/2018 3:49:00 AM
Oh wow Ian, What a message you send out! the same throught has often crossed my mind and I still have an image of a little 4 year old boy in Syria, standing among rubble and debris with no where to turn to - heart rending! Well done! regards, Jennifer
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Date: 10/24/2018 6:17:00 PM
Congratulations on your lifetime membership. This is a grand poem!!
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