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8/4/2025 for J with Four Options Poetry Contest sponsored by Constance La France

The Journey Within

Shall I embark on a dangerous journey -
    into the realm within?
I pretend to know it, 
    but it is largely unexplored.
Much of it abandoned and forgotten,
    cordoned off and forsaken,
      with signs that say, "Warning: Keep Out".
    Deep caves and winding caverns,
      hide a variety of ogres and fiends: 
        the monsters of memory,
        the demons of despair,
        the devils of desire and disappointment,
        the dark angels of anger and abuse.
Could it be that among these treacheries,
    I might also discover
      overlooked hidden treasures:
        vulnerability,
        kindness and empathy
        and, just maybe, even 
the forgotten capacity to love?
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Miller Avatar
August 21, 2025 at 2:46 AM
A vivid allegory of the inner landscape, and honest acknowledgment of painful memories and emotions, well written, congratulations
Crandall Avatar
August 21, 2025 at 2:29 PM
Thanks Terry, I appreciate your comments!
Poteet Avatar
August 20, 2025 at 6:44 AM
Well-written, David. I like your contrasting elements of your memory's journey. It is so real as we grow older and older, more memories I'd guess?? Congrats on your win and kudoes on a thought-provoking piece.
Crandall Avatar
August 20, 2025 at 7:47 PM
Thank you, Reason, glad you liked it!
La France Avatar
August 19, 2025 at 9:28 PM
David, congratulations on your win in my J With Four Options contest. Your poem is well done and I like it, Constance
Crandall Avatar
August 20, 2025 at 7:44 PM
Thanks, Constance, glad you liked it!
Goldsmith Avatar
August 19, 2025 at 12:11 PM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your creative/wonderful "The Journey Within" write. Love is very powerful... Have a blessed day with your win.......
Crandall Avatar
August 20, 2025 at 7:44 PM
Thanks Paula!
Wolf Avatar
August 4, 2025 at 7:32 PM
Interesting question you pose... And after all, doesn't 'Love' pose more danger for those who take on its challenge than anything else in the world?
Crandall Avatar
August 4, 2025 at 8:37 PM
Yes, love is dangerous!
Baker Avatar
August 4, 2025 at 5:05 PM
Very intriguing and mindful poetry, David. I really enjoyed reading the variety of things included in your inward journey. Thanks for sharing your thoughts through your delightful poetry, my friend. Write On! Bill
Crandall Avatar
August 4, 2025 at 6:25 PM
Thanks Bill, appreciate your comments!
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