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Contest- J With Four Options...7/29/25

Sponsor- Constance La France

I drew a rendering with love's charcoal of your face, held in my soul It's drawn on the cave wall of my mind believing it would fade with memory I visit this cave in silent twilight when the world is still and I'm alone where I can crawl into my mind's darker realm holding a lantern from yesterday to see lost relics and fossil mounds containing memories to be dug up beneath my charcoal drawing that appears when I raise my lantern And I can see your face once again

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Date: 7/29/2025 4:39:00 PM
just wow! The cave wall of your mind...brilliant image and concept. Loved the flow. Faving ... have a great evening, Sara
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Frederic Parker
Date: 7/29/2025 7:28:00 PM
thank you Sara for your kind reply, you have a great evening, dear poet...Frederic
Date: 7/29/2025 12:25:00 PM
- A profound journey, Frederic - Best wishes in the contest :) - (I'm in the thinking box for this contest :) - hugs
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Frederic Parker
Date: 7/29/2025 7:25:00 PM
Anne you'll find a way dear poet...Frederic
Date: 7/29/2025 12:14:00 PM
Wow! Thanks for Sharing!
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Frederic Parker
Date: 7/29/2025 7:26:00 PM
thank you Brenda

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