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The Journey of Beauty, Fourth Generation Born

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The Monarch Butterfly is the only insect that migrates over 2,500 miles to hibernate in a warmer climate. However, the return trip is not made by the same butterfly that first flew it. That responsibility becomes that of the newborn butterflies before they return home. Also, while normal butterflies usually die after 2 to 6 weeks, the fourth generation of the Monarch does not lay eggs right away when it is born in late summer. Instead, it fills up on nectar so it can make its long journey south where it will sleep for about five months before repopulating its species (which then flies back to the north)!
From egg to pupa and then to caterpillar - its life has started. When squeezed from its chrysalis, the miracle has blossomed. Flitting through meadows, Beauty seeks its nourishment beneath August skies, delicately alighting on a spray of goldenrod. Petal to petal and stem to succulent stem, the monarch fills up on the nectar that it needs for its ultimate journey. For hundred of miles, an orange flurry of wings crosses southern skies. Reaching its destination, Beauty falls to long slumber. The butterfly wakes with one purpose to fulfill. New eggs must be laid because the journey back home cannot be this monarch’s own. For one final time, this fourth generation born flits among gold blooms, reveling in its last days - its measure of creation. Written by Andrea Dietrich (I learned some interesting facts about Monarchs researching for this poem. Click on "About This Poem") Inspired by Gail Doyle's A Butterfly's Trail Of Kisses Poetry Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/2/2013 4:30:00 PM
nice poem,,,, and the about the poem was very cool,,,, I remember in 3-4 grade we read about butterflies, bees, and birds. It was so awesome to learn that , and we made our own nets in class ;}
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Date: 5/30/2012 12:23:00 PM
I have not been on the soup for almost a week to read and comment. I have enjoyed being able to read your poetry today. I wanted to stop by to thank you for the comments you made during my absence from the soup. I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment Andrea. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/16/2012 2:56:00 PM
Love those butterflies and wait to enjoy them in the summer. Nice poem. love phyl
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Date: 4/9/2012 5:15:00 PM
Such a great story, and interesting facts about Monarchs. We don't get them much where I live, mostly swallowtails.
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Date: 4/8/2012 2:49:00 PM
wanted to read this lovely one again - i should have taken note of your spellings, lol
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Date: 4/8/2012 1:10:00 PM
A stunning informative write Andrea and you did it in a form that I love. I truly enjoyed this gem, wishing you the best for the contest with your unique theme as well, love Wilma
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Date: 4/8/2012 5:25:00 AM
I read somewhere that the Monarch's go somewhere in South America to reproduce..It is amazing what they must go through to get back to where they need to go so that species can survive..Enjoyed your story told about their lives..Reads like a winner to me..As far as I know there is not a place called Boondocks but it is refering to a place that is uninhabitated and grown up with thickets and woodlands..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 4/7/2012 7:26:00 PM
Nice dear poetess. Very creative.
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Date: 4/7/2012 6:11:00 PM
Wow, great job, Andrea! You packed a lot of facts in this beauty. I love butterflies and enjoyed reading this tonight. Best wishes in the contest. Happy Easter to you and your family, Rhonda
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Date: 4/7/2012 12:45:00 PM
Another gorgeous butterfly is the Viceroy - somewhat similar to the Monarch, but rounder wing tips. Sad, but beautiful. Love, daver
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Date: 4/7/2012 11:26:00 AM
Andrea, I like the way you descripe the caterpillar's transitiion into a butterfly. (I had a description of the chrysallis in a poem long ago.) Monarch butterflies gather in the Wakulla County, FL area when it's too cold in other places. You should see them swarm. Awesome entry for Gail's contest. Surely a winner! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/7/2012 11:20:00 AM
Andrea an interesting journey of a humble buttterfly, good luck..David
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Date: 4/7/2012 11:19:00 AM
Very informative write! [A Starfish in Her Hair is RHYME with haiku..not free verse at all my Andie..you do write end rhyme and you do write haiku ;)] Light & love
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Date: 4/7/2012 10:51:00 AM
a radiant poem Andrea and loverly entry for Gail's conterst.. good luck but this one speaks and stands on its own luv.. a sure fire eye catcher .. I luv doing research also when certain themes are involved.. enjoyed luv..
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Date: 4/7/2012 6:42:00 AM
i love this clever and informative butterfly piece, andrea. many congrats on your wins
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