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a red sunset lights the sky as if over Dante's damned inferno fierce fiery colours lashing out across the horizon's jagged ridge the fangs, they gnarl and menace they growl at another day that sadly brings about more shame than good but the determined live to fight another day AP: Honorable Mention 2022 Submitted on March 22, 2022 for contest FORM J - JUST WRITE ME A NEW POEM POETRY sponsored by CONSTANCE LA FRANCE - RANKED 3RD

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Date: 3/26/2022 7:00:00 PM
Line, congratulations on your win in my Just Write Me A Poem contest, wonderful ~Constance
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/27/2022 8:46:00 AM
Thank you very much, Constance. Most appreciated ~
Date: 3/25/2022 10:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A powerful/colorful~~write/picture. Enjoy your win and day with blessings..........
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/25/2022 12:00:00 PM
Thank you very much, Paula. Most appreciated ~
Date: 3/24/2022 10:20:00 PM
"Dante's damned inferno" - Great philosophy behind .Beautifully written. Congratulations!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/25/2022 12:00:00 PM
Thank you very much for your most appreciated comment, Christuraj ~
Date: 3/24/2022 7:04:00 PM
Powerful as also picturesque, congrats on your win, Line!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/25/2022 12:01:00 PM
Thank you so much ~ most appreciated ~
Date: 3/22/2022 9:09:00 PM
Love this metaphorical poem, Line! Very well written! :)
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/23/2022 11:38:00 AM
Most appreciated, thank you, Laura ~
Date: 3/22/2022 8:08:00 PM
nicely done, Line, great description and feel on your verse
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/23/2022 11:38:00 AM
Thank you very much, Eve.

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