The Invisible Wand

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May be an image of 1 person and text that says '"One does not become enlightened by imagining figures of light, but by making the darkness conscious." Carl Jung'

Wrapped in the solitude of one blessed night
the moon-eyed moon wanders lightly and alone
inside a vast and deep, darkly expansive sky
Dark cores of light glide
through a dormant ether,
as butterfly shadows play softly against
a dense canopy of leaves.
A still figure appears as if by chance,
underneath the cadence of the light,
swaying like wavering puppets on a string
she meditates on
the fast appearing stars ...
Creating magic from the tatters of the night
she's an invisible wand to the world
but unto thyself, she is as full, as the moon.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025



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Date: 7/1/2025 12:22:00 AM
Belated Congratulations on POTD for this lovely poem sweet Rose! Debx
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Date: 6/22/2025 12:09:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD.Well done.
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Date: 6/21/2025 7:44:00 PM
Love the ending! Absolutely enchanting. Congrats on your POTD!
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Date: 6/21/2025 5:10:00 PM
Vienna, this thought is beautiful and holds so much truth. ' she's an invisible wand to the world. ' That's the way it should always be. Light scatters darkness- every time. Congratulations my dear friend, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 6/21/2025 2:30:00 PM
Mystic Rose, you’ve created something that lingers, like a gentle spell still unfolding after the final word. I felt like I was drifting through a dream. I love how it made me slow down and just breathe in the night. Thank you for the opportunity to step into that world for a moment. Dream on...
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Date: 6/21/2025 1:05:00 PM
returning to congratulate you on a well deserved POTD. Enjoy your moment!
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Date: 6/21/2025 12:23:00 PM
Congrats on POTD! Moon eyed moon wanders lightly! Wonderful imagination!!
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Date: 6/21/2025 8:48:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. What a creative/wonderful "The Invisible Wand" write. Love your ending... Have a blessed day/weekend with your wonderful win.........
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Date: 6/21/2025 7:56:00 AM
OK, OK, i've read it three times and ...well....all I can say is WOW...DOUBLE WOW.....
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Date: 6/21/2025 6:59:00 AM
Stunningly beautiful dear Vie. So good to see your POTD! hugs :)
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Date: 6/21/2025 6:10:00 AM
Hello Rose, congratulations on your POTD win with your beautiful poem. Have a wonderful weekend as you celebrate, my friend.
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Date: 6/21/2025 5:29:00 AM
Beautiful writing, Vie. Congratulations on POTD!
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Date: 6/21/2025 5:15:00 AM
Vie, congratulations on POTD.
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Date: 6/21/2025 3:35:00 AM
Breathtaking imagery within beautiful words! Congratulations on your potd sweet poetess!
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Date: 6/21/2025 3:31:00 AM
Dear Vie, your poem is quietly enchanting — like a whispered spell under a silver sky. There's a graceful stillness in the imagery, where moonlight and shadow dance in harmony with the meditative soul at its center. I love how the poem captures the delicate balance between solitude and power, invisibility and inner fullness. Congratulaions on your POTD...Hugs
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Date: 6/21/2025 2:52:00 AM
Dear Rose, Congratulations on POTD! Enjoy your special day :) <3
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Date: 6/21/2025 1:52:00 AM
- Congratulations on your beautiful p.o.t.d., Vie Rose :) - hugs
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Date: 6/21/2025 1:43:00 AM
A beautiful poem Mystic Rose. Congratulations on receiving the honour of poem of the day… Beryl
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Date: 6/21/2025 1:07:00 AM
Beautiful musings, Mystic Rose, touches the heart. Warmest congratulations on POTD
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Date: 6/21/2025 1:02:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD.
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Date: 6/20/2025 1:51:00 AM
They are both important...one must first, dream, imagine, if to have. Thought patterns are also substance -- why we must guard our thoughts. See it long enough, deep enough...and it will surface. Beautiful! You get a FAV!
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Date: 6/20/2025 3:31:00 AM
Yes its so important to dream and imagine, they say what we imagine we turn into concrete eventually. Its our reality, let us rise to the top of the mountain, and reach new heights :)
Date: 6/19/2025 2:28:00 PM
truly magnificent and engaging words that are also descriptive. The last three lines spoke to me. Well done! Am faving, yellow rose
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Date: 6/20/2025 3:30:00 AM
I'm so honored dear Rose, you made my day, sending you friendships flowers of peace and strength :)
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