The Invisible Wand

Wrapped in the solitude of one blessed night
the moon-eyed moon wanders lightly and alone
inside a vast and deep, darkly expansive sky
Dark cores of light glide
through a dormant ether,
as butterfly shadows play softly against
a dense canopy of leaves.
A still figure appears as if by chance,
underneath the cadence of the light,
swaying like wavering puppets on a string
she meditates on
the fast appearing stars ...
Creating magic from the tatters of the night
she's an invisible wand to the world
but unto thyself, she is as full, as the moon.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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M  Avatar
July 1, 2025 at 12:22 AM
Belated Congratulations on POTD for this lovely poem sweet Rose! Debx
Meadows Avatar
June 22, 2025 at 12:09 AM
Congratulations on your POTD.Well done.
Bartley Avatar
June 21, 2025 at 7:44 PM
Love the ending! Absolutely enchanting. Congrats on your POTD!
Nicole Avatar
June 21, 2025 at 5:10 PM
Vienna, this thought is beautiful and holds so much truth. ' she's an invisible wand to the world. ' That's the way it should always be. Light scatters darkness- every time. Congratulations my dear friend, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Grubb Avatar
June 21, 2025 at 2:30 PM
Mystic Rose, you’ve created something that lingers, like a gentle spell still unfolding after the final word. I felt like I was drifting through a dream. I love how it made me slow down and just breathe in the night. Thank you for the opportunity to step into that world for a moment. Dream on...
Etgen-Baker Avatar
June 21, 2025 at 1:05 PM
returning to congratulate you on a well deserved POTD. Enjoy your moment!
Radhakrishna Avatar
June 21, 2025 at 12:23 PM
Congrats on POTD! Moon eyed moon wanders lightly! Wonderful imagination!!
Goldsmith Avatar
June 21, 2025 at 8:48 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. What a creative/wonderful "The Invisible Wand" write. Love your ending... Have a blessed day/weekend with your wonderful win.........
Lawless Avatar
June 21, 2025 at 7:56 AM
OK, OK, i've read it three times and ...well....all I can say is WOW...DOUBLE WOW.....
Fowler Avatar
June 21, 2025 at 6:59 AM
Stunningly beautiful dear Vie. So good to see your POTD! hugs :)
Gifford Avatar
June 21, 2025 at 6:10 AM
Hello Rose, congratulations on your POTD win with your beautiful poem. Have a wonderful weekend as you celebrate, my friend.
Messina Avatar
June 21, 2025 at 5:29 AM
Beautiful writing, Vie. Congratulations on POTD!
Kitchin Avatar
June 21, 2025 at 5:15 AM
Vie, congratulations on POTD.
Jones Avatar
June 21, 2025 at 3:35 AM
Breathtaking imagery within beautiful words! Congratulations on your potd sweet poetess!
Williams Avatar
June 21, 2025 at 3:31 AM
Dear Vie, your poem is quietly enchanting — like a whispered spell under a silver sky. There's a graceful stillness in the imagery, where moonlight and shadow dance in harmony with the meditative soul at its center. I love how the poem captures the delicate balance between solitude and power, invisibility and inner fullness. Congratulaions on your POTD...Hugs
Winter Avatar
June 21, 2025 at 2:52 AM
Dear Rose, Congratulations on POTD! Enjoy your special day :) <3
Andresen Avatar
June 21, 2025 at 1:52 AM
- Congratulations on your beautiful p.o.t.d., Vie Rose :) - hugs
Edmonds  Avatar
June 21, 2025 at 1:43 AM
A beautiful poem Mystic Rose. Congratulations on receiving the honour of poem of the day… Beryl
Seeker Avatar
June 21, 2025 at 1:07 AM
Beautiful musings, Mystic Rose, touches the heart. Warmest congratulations on POTD
Greenhough Avatar
June 21, 2025 at 1:02 AM
Congratulations on POTD.
DiMino Avatar
June 20, 2025 at 1:51 AM
They are both important...one must first, dream, imagine, if to have. Thought patterns are also substance -- why we must guard our thoughts. See it long enough, deep enough...and it will surface. Beautiful! You get a FAV!
Rose  Avatar
June 20, 2025 at 3:31 AM
Yes its so important to dream and imagine, they say what we imagine we turn into concrete eventually. Its our reality, let us rise to the top of the mountain, and reach new heights :)
Etgen-Baker Avatar
June 19, 2025 at 2:28 PM
truly magnificent and engaging words that are also descriptive. The last three lines spoke to me. Well done! Am faving, yellow rose
Rose  Avatar
June 20, 2025 at 3:30 AM
I'm so honored dear Rose, you made my day, sending you friendships flowers of peace and strength :)
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