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The Intensity of Inner One

Close your eyes and hold breath Count to ten and leave in air, I think you can feel rest on tenth Indeed,it's how you feel layer. The inner layer of own mind, In the deep ocean,you suppose If you dive,you can see many kind Of fishs and flora,and rise with close nose. And again dive in it to see, But I think you feel still With this imagination ,now flee Like a bird and tension kill.

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Date: 8/11/2025 8:44:00 PM
Indeed, meditation is both mentally and physically healing. Silence is a golden retreat. I get your wonderful point.
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