The In-Sync Honeymoon Dreamers

On an island of love, side by side,
strolled Ron and his beautiful bride.
So like heaven it seemed,
the two of them deemed
that to be there, they both must have died!

“Are we possibly dreaming?” they said.
“If we’re dreaming, we really aren’t dead!”
Upon saying this rhyme
at the very same time,
they awoke in their very own bed!

“So in synche with our dreams we have been,”
Ron said to his wife with a grin,
“We need never leave home.
Make our next stop be Rome.
Close your eyes, dear; let’s DO IT again!”


For LInda-Marie's Contest:
"Loveland LImerick"

Based on photo JT76955-Edit jpg
Written by Andrea Dietrich
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Davis Avatar
February 12, 2014 at 8:28 AM
Andrea Such a cute and charming write. Taking a "dream" vacation together without all the expenses. That would be great. Nice job Thanks for the sweet comment on my Love Seed poem
Horne Avatar
August 6, 2012 at 9:37 AM
lol, love it - I think I remember this contest
Mehta Avatar
April 12, 2011 at 4:44 AM
Thanks Andrea for congratulatory comment on my win in Linda's contest. Of late, I am not much on Poetrysoup due to low inspiration as also due to focus on other matters. Anyways, luv & best wishes always for your inspirational comments.
Mehta Avatar
April 12, 2011 at 4:38 AM
Many congrats Andrea on notching big win in Linda's Contest with this romantic imaginative piece. Luv & Best wishes - Hitendra Mehta
Muzzey Avatar
April 11, 2011 at 9:00 AM
Congratulations on your second place win with this wonderful write. I loved the last line! I enjoyed the read. Caryl
Susan Avatar
April 11, 2011 at 5:08 AM
Congrats on your win. A lovely poem!
Brown Avatar
April 11, 2011 at 4:36 AM
Congratulations on your win Andrea in Linda-Marie's contest "Loveland Limerick". Love, Carol
Horsman Avatar
April 11, 2011 at 1:43 AM
i really love this, congrats. Harry
Mannan Avatar
April 10, 2011 at 10:54 PM
I did close my eyes Andrea and imagined your words. Beautiful. Many warm congrats dear friend.
Onclaud Avatar
April 10, 2011 at 7:47 PM
ahhah!! my seventh instinct told me so, heartie.. smackaroos for the towering win with my huggs! nette
Magness Avatar
April 10, 2011 at 7:16 PM
Great read. congrats on your 2nd place finish!! Brian
Horne Avatar
April 10, 2011 at 11:05 AM
Great fun! Many congratulations, Andrea : ) Jack
K. Avatar
April 10, 2011 at 10:48 AM
This is such a cute & imaginative set of limericks Andrea-- sorry I missed reading this earlier? That's really fun! enjoyed this one & super congrats on your 2nd place ;) hugs to you :)
Phookan Avatar
April 10, 2011 at 10:26 AM
What a wonderful idea, projected in poetic form. Amazing Andrea. Congratulations on your 2nd place win..Have a great time,Gautami
Johnson Avatar
April 10, 2011 at 10:24 AM
Unique and great writing. Congratulaions Andrea. I don't know how you find time. Love, Joyce
Maverick Avatar
April 10, 2011 at 10:08 AM
Great to see the 2nd place win Andrea, a great piece to read today.
Freeman Avatar
April 10, 2011 at 9:50 AM
Excellent entry Andrea, Congratulations on your honored second place. Agape, Moses
Guzzi Avatar
April 10, 2011 at 8:23 AM
So cool Andie so much of Linda's tale told so briefly and in perfect meter too! Congrad's on your big win. Light & Love
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April 10, 2011 at 8:13 AM
Andrea congrats my dear on your well desewrved win!! luv Michael
Mehta Avatar
April 10, 2011 at 8:06 AM
Congratulations on the second place win in the contest of Linda, Andrea
Sweetheart Avatar
April 10, 2011 at 7:53 AM
Congrats Andrea on your success in my contest..with this stunning entry.. thankxx for your constant support luv..
Fraser Avatar
April 9, 2011 at 4:14 AM
Nice Limerick set Andrea, good luck in Linda-Marie's contest....:)
Mac Donald Avatar
March 25, 2011 at 2:06 PM
This is a brilliant piece, Andrea. It seems as though they'd done an astral voyage, together. Fun, and very witty! Thank you for sharing, and great luck with that contest! Best to you and yours, Mikki
Neels Avatar
March 18, 2011 at 2:24 AM
This is quite an awesome series you have here Andrea, wishing you all the best with this one which I am sure will be a winner ;) love Wilma
Onclaud Avatar
March 17, 2011 at 11:57 PM
*whistling whoooot wooo!.." andie girl, charming passion for soup's sweetheart written with such poetic flair... oh, i'm so behind with all the tourneys going around!! a winner on the run! :) hugggs, nette
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