May 10, 2018
~ First Place ~ Contest: May 2018 Premiere Contest Sponsor: Brian Strand
Hold me in your eyes, look upon me in tender interlude embrace me in the center of your dawning light. Let your essence speak and whisper sweet nothings - or - stirring somethings to my soul the power and purity of your poetry thrills me! Awaken my being with a new palette of mellow musings and watercolor whimsies. Plant virgin taste buds to bloom anew to taste life, as if, for the first time reborn, with a constant craving of never getting enough. To make pearls out of grit is to make sorrow and hardship a thing of beauty.
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