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The Inept Pianist

Being handsome alone is not important. Having talent is. Quote by poet. Bewitched, her fingers flew, keys pressed, sound vibrated song sang assonance in perfect pitch. He tried, he fumbled, closed his ears, a cacophony of vulgar barbarism. He remembered standing up disgusted, turning, looking in a mirror, a nauseous narcissus. He could not help but admire his sapphire eyes, the clean, well-shaved chin, his perfect figure... all useless, for he lacked her talent, her special gift, her poise; but not her face where ugliness triumphed. It was then, alas, that he felt the death of music in his soul.

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Date: 11/29/2024 1:09:00 PM
Oh!! So sad. God gives the gifts and the beauty. Thanks for sharing this one with a moral with us. Sara K
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Date: 11/29/2024 9:33:00 AM
Music brings beauty to the soul
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Date: 11/27/2024 7:57:00 PM
External beauty comes only secondary to one's capabilities, innate talents and internal gifts. Through your poem, you have given a clear idea of what is of real worth. A beautiful and meaningful poem, dear Victor.
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Date: 11/27/2024 6:05:00 PM
A beautiful spirit transcends all else. Music can be gateway to the soul. Wonderful write my friend!
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Date: 11/27/2024 3:56:00 PM
Dear Victor, what a great illustration showing the chasm between appearance and true talent. Beauty fades when not paired with substance. Your poeticwords evoke a powerful reminder to seek depth over mere façade. Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Date: 11/27/2024 3:36:00 PM
such a moving piece Victor and i do love your quote, you are a wise man indeed:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/27/2024 1:25:00 PM
Wow that was sure different. I liked it very much. I am overwhelmed this year and have decided not to send out Xmas cards this year. Just know I will always be wishing you merry Christmas, Victor
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Date: 11/27/2024 1:12:00 PM
Very nice, I love listening to piano or violin music. Enjoyed reading
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Date: 11/27/2024 12:20:00 PM
Dear victor, this is so well written and delivered and the quote Is so true and wise! I agree with you, and I especially loved the way you’ve written “ It was then, alas, that he felt the death of music in his soul.” Wow’ death of music is a brilliant way of describing the darkness within a narcissist! Or one that cannot see beauty beyond skin. Pleasure reading this. Sending you light always
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Date: 11/27/2024 11:36:00 AM
Such a realization of failure to a narcissist my friend. Something he must own for being that way. Love the interaction between the two and his emotions reflecting such. Well written Victor and so clever of you to write. Be blessed my friend...
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Date: 11/27/2024 10:07:00 AM
This is a gripping poem, masterfully and beautifully written! This probing of the meaning of beauty moved me. Blessings.
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Date: 11/27/2024 9:34:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful write with a great quote. What a ending you have here.  Love It.....Have A Blessed/Happy Day....................
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Date: 11/27/2024 7:39:00 AM
"song sang", "nauseous narcissus", When his mind was busy with detecting the physical ugliness of the musician, "death of music in his soul" started. Great work.
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Date: 11/27/2024 6:17:00 AM
Excellent poetry explores in a melancholy and wonderfully rich way the intricate relationships of envy, selfishness, and the grief of unfulfilled dreams. Her freewheeling inventiveness and his inner conflicts create a strongly felt strain.
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Date: 11/27/2024 6:11:00 AM
Real beauty comes from within, something narcissists don't realise. Tom
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Date: 11/27/2024 4:43:00 AM
- Deeply moving and beautifully written, Victor :) - hugs
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Date: 11/27/2024 12:39:00 AM
piano is an art for few, i was too a bad pianist, but never took it seriously, thanks for the nice and touching poem
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Date: 11/27/2024 12:08:00 AM
Such wisdom in this poem. I wish I could take it to heart. Beauty... doesn't make up for talent.
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Date: 11/26/2024 11:36:00 PM
Dear Victor, your poem is both haunting and beautifully layered, exploring the delicate interplay of envy, self-obsession, and the tragedy of unfulfilled potential. The contrast between her effortless artistry and his inner turmoil creates a poignant tension, culminating in the poignant "death of music in his soul."...Hugs
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