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The Indelible

Far, a widowed mother walked hill and vale, Searching her only son who'd gone to war; Love-blind; hopeful; day and night without fail, Heart-aches; foot-blisters; full of scar and soar; Stones pricking; thorns piercing; miles many tread, The scorching sun and wild waves she withstood; Sad! No trace of son's footprints, tears she shed, Each bird, each flower on her way she asked; He's dead, they said, in some war, so recent, Keep calm! Rest! Offer prayers as one should! Yet, hope doubled; task-focused; far she went, No mirage, could ever, her true love shroud; Winds and waves might erase your footprints, but Who could, mother, the prints of love, wipe out? “Size Six”

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Date: 5/5/2021 12:29:00 PM
So poignant with the scent of melancholy - a mother's love emotively portrayed. Congratulations on your win!
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 5/8/2021 3:02:00 PM
Thank you very much.
Date: 5/4/2021 9:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful story/write. A mother's love does lasts forever. Have a blessed day................
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 5/4/2021 10:39:00 AM
Thank you very much. My wishes are due to you.
Date: 5/4/2021 8:05:00 AM
Christuraj, we think alike and I have a similar sonnet called "Civility." I can't imagine how hard it is for a widowed mother to search for her son, refusing to accept that he is dead. A mother's love lasts forever. There were many extraordinary poems in this contest. Congratulations on a well-deserved win! And thank you for supporting the contest. Hugs, Carolyn
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 5/4/2021 10:40:00 AM
Thank you very much. It's all because of you.
Date: 5/3/2021 4:56:00 AM
Brilliance outshines everything else in this lovely tribute to a mother's love:)
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 5/3/2021 9:58:00 AM
I have read some of your works. They are really beautiful. Especially, 'Forlorn Hope'.
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 5/3/2021 7:00:00 AM
Thank you very much.

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