The Inconsistencies of Time

When did it turn around? I wonder now  
when the exact moment was I stopped 
looking ahead? Some moment in time
I looked back.  Back, back and back
and yet it is not far since that young  girl
thought swinging on a star would be her
destiny.

That first ten years of life stretched on and on.
The second decade faster but not so fast
as the next and faster still the next.
Faster and faster now the years go by.
What happened only yesterday was
truly months ago and last months happening 
at least a year.

The caveman had a life span of a 
mere twenty years, but he did not mark
it off by minutes, hours and days.
Without a clock perhaps he too
could stretch it out like children do
that first decade.

We keep each minute marching on
by keeping time.  No laggard minutes here.
There, that one’s gone and that one
and now they’re speeding up and more
like seconds than the honest minutes they 
should really be. 

I remember the little girl I was, counting the 
months and weeks to her birthday
or to Christmas and wishing intervening
days away, not realizing she was spending
time she’d long to have back some day.
I know I cannot turn back time but I
can turn off time’s measuring devices and
slow it down that way.

If I should turn off those offending clocks 
and face the calendars to the walls. I would
I suppose, miss some important doctor 
appointment or a family event.
My daughter would scold and say.
"I’ve told you Mom.  You have to write it down
Your memory is not what it used to be".

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 4/25/2011 4:45:00 PM
Clocks and calendars do become offenders as we get older. Wouldn't it be great if we could pull a "Benjamin Button" (as in the movie), and go back in time to happier days? Beautifully written, Joyce, and very thought-provoking! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/24/2011 7:37:00 PM
This was very good..
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Date: 4/24/2011 7:29:00 PM
this was awesome good job..cory
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Date: 4/24/2011 12:34:00 PM
Time is a great topic about which to write..There are so many ways to express what time is to an individual..Enjoyed reading your work..This one took some thought..Thanks for stopping by my blog..I hope that this is one of the best days for you and your family...I know that you are enjoying every aspect of the day..I used to have Easter dinner and the hunt but I don't have a little one to do that any more...Sara
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Date: 4/24/2011 3:23:00 AM
a sparkling write about time's hazed passing, joyce.. a gtreeat joy to read.. i can;t imagine myself YET having some senior moments( with sincere grace to the word " senior).. lovely! :) huggs ! SOUP MAIL
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