The In-Sync Honeymoon Dreamers

On an island of love, side by side,
strolled Ron and his beautiful bride.
So like heaven it seemed,
the two of them deemed
that to be there, they both must have died!

“Are we possibly dreaming?” they said.
“If we’re dreaming, we really aren’t dead!”
Upon saying this rhyme
at the very same time,
they awoke in their very own bed!

“So in synche with our dreams we have been,”
Ron said to his wife with a grin,
“We need never leave home.
Make our next stop be Rome.
Close your eyes, dear; let’s DO IT again!”

For LInda-Marie's Contest:
"Loveland LImerick"

Based on photo JT76955-Edit jpg
Written by Andrea Dietrich

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Date: 2/12/2014 8:28:00 AM
Andrea Such a cute and charming write. Taking a "dream" vacation together without all the expenses. That would be great. Nice job Thanks for the sweet comment on my Love Seed poem
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Date: 8/6/2012 9:37:00 AM
lol, love it - I think I remember this contest
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Date: 4/12/2011 4:44:00 AM
Thanks Andrea for congratulatory comment on my win in Linda's contest. Of late, I am not much on Poetrysoup due to low inspiration as also due to focus on other matters. Anyways, luv & best wishes always for your inspirational comments.
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Date: 4/12/2011 4:38:00 AM
Many congrats Andrea on notching big win in Linda's Contest with this romantic imaginative piece. Luv & Best wishes - Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 4/11/2011 9:00:00 AM
Congratulations on your second place win with this wonderful write. I loved the last line! I enjoyed the read. Caryl
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Date: 4/11/2011 5:08:00 AM
Congrats on your win. A lovely poem!
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Date: 4/11/2011 4:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Andrea in Linda-Marie's contest "Loveland Limerick". Love, Carol
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Date: 4/11/2011 1:43:00 AM
i really love this, congrats. Harry
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Date: 4/10/2011 10:54:00 PM
I did close my eyes Andrea and imagined your words. Beautiful. Many warm congrats dear friend.
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Date: 4/10/2011 7:47:00 PM
ahhah!! my seventh instinct told me so, heartie.. smackaroos for the towering win with my huggs! nette
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Date: 4/10/2011 7:16:00 PM
Great read. congrats on your 2nd place finish!! Brian
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Date: 4/10/2011 11:05:00 AM
Great fun! Many congratulations, Andrea : ) Jack
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Date: 4/10/2011 10:48:00 AM
This is such a cute & imaginative set of limericks Andrea-- sorry I missed reading this earlier? That's really fun! enjoyed this one & super congrats on your 2nd place ;) hugs to you :)
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Date: 4/10/2011 10:26:00 AM
What a wonderful idea, projected in poetic form. Amazing Andrea. Congratulations on your 2nd place win..Have a great time,Gautami
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Date: 4/10/2011 10:24:00 AM
Unique and great writing. Congratulaions Andrea. I don't know how you find time. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/10/2011 10:08:00 AM
Great to see the 2nd place win Andrea, a great piece to read today.
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Date: 4/10/2011 9:50:00 AM
Excellent entry Andrea, Congratulations on your honored second place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 4/10/2011 8:23:00 AM
So cool Andie so much of Linda's tale told so briefly and in perfect meter too! Congrad's on your big win. Light & Love
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Date: 4/10/2011 8:13:00 AM
Andrea congrats my dear on your well desewrved win!! luv Michael
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Date: 4/10/2011 8:06:00 AM
Congratulations on the second place win in the contest of Linda, Andrea
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Date: 4/10/2011 7:53:00 AM
Congrats Andrea on your success in my contest..with this stunning entry.. thankxx for your constant support luv..
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Date: 4/9/2011 4:14:00 AM
Nice Limerick set Andrea, good luck in Linda-Marie's contest....:)
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Date: 3/25/2011 2:06:00 PM
This is a brilliant piece, Andrea. It seems as though they'd done an astral voyage, together. Fun, and very witty! Thank you for sharing, and great luck with that contest! Best to you and yours, Mikki
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Date: 3/18/2011 2:24:00 AM
This is quite an awesome series you have here Andrea, wishing you all the best with this one which I am sure will be a winner ;) love Wilma
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Date: 3/17/2011 11:57:00 PM
*whistling whoooot wooo!.." andie girl, charming passion for soup's sweetheart written with such poetic flair... oh, i'm so behind with all the tourneys going around!! a winner on the run! :) hugggs, nette
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