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The Importance of Beeing

Being a bee - A buzzy drive, Sole ownership Of honey hive. My zest for life - Laborious, By nature sweet And glorious. With waggle dance I’ll guide the rest To flower feast In nectar quest. My fatal flaw - Stinging backside, You curse and live But I have died. So cheer me on Production spree, Do not disturb, Just let me bee! May 25, 2022

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Date: 7/19/2022 2:46:00 AM
Congratulations, well-deserved
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Date: 7/17/2022 10:57:00 AM
Wonderful poem! You've placed 5th place out of 55 entries in my contest! I loved the terseness of the piece while packed with strong imagery. Great work!
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Date: 5/27/2022 1:03:00 PM
Fine penning Margarita with a nice expression and causing quite a sting! Regards, Gordon
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Date: 5/26/2022 6:02:00 PM
What a surprise to find!!!! Looking for more.
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Margarita Lillico
Date: 5/27/2022 8:33:00 AM
Thanks, humbled like a bee :)

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