Margarita Lillico Poet Rhyme

The Importance of Beeing

Being a bee -
A buzzy drive, 
Sole ownership 
Of honey hive.

My zest for life -
Laborious,
By nature sweet 
And glorious. 

With waggle dance 
I’ll guide the rest 
To flower feast 
In nectar quest. 

My fatal flaw - 
Stinging backside, 
You curse and live 
But I have died. 

So cheer me on 
Production spree, 
Do not disturb, 
Just let me bee! 

May 25, 2022

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Terry Miller July 19, 2022 at 2:46 AM Congratulations, well-deserved

Matt Caliri July 17, 2022 at 10:57 AM Wonderful poem! You've placed 5th place out of 55 entries in my contest! I loved the terseness of the piece while packed with strong imagery. Great work!

Gordon Mcconnell May 27, 2022 at 1:03 PM Fine penning Margarita with a nice expression and causing quite a sting! Regards, Gordon

The Situation May 26, 2022 at 6:02 PM What a surprise to find!!!! Looking for more. Margarita Lillico May 27, 2022 at 8:33 AM Thanks, humbled like a bee :)