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The Impetus To Bite

She strings silken snares, spanning every chasm trying to entrap an unwary fly. A slight vibration causes her to spasm, delighting in the news that lunch is nigh. She dines in opulence; walls draped in silk, where mummified meals hang as trophies won. Her inner chamber's the color of milk, but dewdrops make her web gleam in the sun. A vicarious thrill follows each kill, within the theater of life and death. Hunger supplies the impetus to bite, and poison ensures flies breathe their last breath. The spider holds no feelings for the fly, and yet, for it to live, the fly must die.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Barden Avatar
September 4, 2018 at 8:55 PM
Sincere congratulations for your win in John's contest, Emile, wonderful write - blessings and continued success, my friend! :-)
Pinet Avatar
September 5, 2018 at 8:25 AM
Thanks Gregory, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Hamilton Avatar
September 3, 2018 at 3:46 PM
Well done Emile, nice to see your name on my winners list again!
Pinet Avatar
September 3, 2018 at 4:21 PM
Thank you John, I am grateful to be there my friend, Emile.
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August 17, 2018 at 7:25 PM
Facts poetically shared. Loved the rhyme and content that so well chimed to earn my smile for the poetry and wonderment for the spider / fly relationship. Nature, eh? You've proven that just about anything can be beautified in a poem. All the best ... CayCay
Pinet Avatar
August 18, 2018 at 6:45 AM
Thanks CAyCay, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Gauthier Avatar
August 17, 2018 at 1:24 PM
Wow, vicious spiders. Well penned, Emile.
Pinet Avatar
August 18, 2018 at 6:45 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Smith Avatar
August 17, 2018 at 12:37 PM
Brutally well done Emile, best wishes in the contest...
Pinet Avatar
August 17, 2018 at 2:08 PM
Thanks Charlie, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Watson Avatar
August 17, 2018 at 9:30 AM
This is a fantastic use of the allotted words, Émile! I love it! Just one spelling error : 'nigh' not 'neigh'
Pinet Avatar
August 17, 2018 at 10:32 AM
Thanks so much Wendy, As always I appreciate your help and support my friend, Emile.
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