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She strings silken snares, spanning every chasm trying to entrap an unwary fly. A slight vibration causes her to spasm, delighting in the news that lunch is nigh. She dines in opulence; walls draped in silk, where mummified meals hang as trophies won. Her inner chamber's the color of milk, but dewdrops make her web gleam in the sun. A vicarious thrill follows each kill, within the theater of life and death. Hunger supplies the impetus to bite, and poison ensures flies breathe their last breath. The spider holds no feelings for the fly, and yet, for it to live, the fly must die. (Sonnet) 8/17/2018

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Date: 9/4/2018 8:55:00 PM
Sincere congratulations for your win in John's contest, Emile, wonderful write - blessings and continued success, my friend! :-)
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Date: 9/5/2018 8:25:00 AM
Thanks Gregory, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/3/2018 3:46:00 PM
Well done Emile, nice to see your name on my winners list again!
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Date: 9/3/2018 4:21:00 PM
Thank you John, I am grateful to be there my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/17/2018 7:25:00 PM
Facts poetically shared. Loved the rhyme and content that so well chimed to earn my smile for the poetry and wonderment for the spider / fly relationship. Nature, eh? You've proven that just about anything can be beautified in a poem. All the best ... CayCay
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Date: 8/18/2018 6:45:00 AM
Thanks CAyCay, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/17/2018 1:24:00 PM
Wow, vicious spiders. Well penned, Emile.
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Date: 8/18/2018 6:45:00 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/17/2018 12:37:00 PM
Brutally well done Emile, best wishes in the contest...
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Date: 8/17/2018 2:08:00 PM
Thanks Charlie, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/17/2018 9:30:00 AM
This is a fantastic use of the allotted words, Émile! I love it! Just one spelling error : 'nigh' not 'neigh'
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/17/2018 10:32:00 AM
Thanks so much Wendy, As always I appreciate your help and support my friend, Emile.

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