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The Image of Being In Need

The Image of Being In Need My eyes are covered in gauze, from dirt scratching both of my corneas. My boyfriend leads me around otherwise I'd find myself on my knees feeling the ground. He takes care of me and tends to my needs. He accidently squirts ear wax cleaner into my eyes instead of my prescribed eye drops. Oh the pain, I thought would drive me insane. No apologies either! He picks my clothes out and helps me dress, too close for my comfort. The humility found in depending on another for survival was not high. So glad I'm looking for a new guy now, the image of me depending on him for a lifetime is not a good one. For he left me feeling more like a burden then a friend in need, to me that makes him a bad seed for me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 7/8/2010 7:07:00 AM
Congratulations Marie on your win in Frank Herrera's contest "Images". Love, Carol
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Date: 7/8/2010 1:54:00 AM
Congratulatons on your win in Frank's contest, marie. Love, Lainie
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Date: 7/7/2010 10:52:00 AM
Love this! Congratulations on your win. Andrea
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Date: 7/7/2010 10:42:00 AM
Congrats on your well deserved win in Frank’s contest. May you have many more wins as you keep your passionate pen alive… Please keep writing great poems, and enjoy this honor. Love, Adeleke
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Date: 7/7/2010 10:38:00 AM
Congrats on your well deserved win in Frank’s contest. May you have many more wins as you keep your passionate pen alive… Please keep writing great poems, and enjoy this honor. Love, Adeleke
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Date: 7/7/2010 9:31:00 AM
What an interesting use of imagery. Good way to convey your thoughts. Congratulations on your second place finish in the Images contest. Enjoy your success. Keep that pen flowing. Karen
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Date: 7/7/2010 7:28:00 AM
Congraltulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/7/2010 5:23:00 AM
Congrats Marie on your big win in the Images contest with this awesome and astounding write my friend.. enjoy .. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii.. AlohA...
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Date: 6/27/2010 7:54:00 PM
a needed inventory! I declare! good one! Marie! jimbo
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