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The Hush of Twilight and Dust

Written: July 26, 2025, for contest Sponsored by: JCB Brul ******************** *** /|\ s-u-n\|/ g *** r i p r — i s the b c a g \e/ k * * * * * s w| h | e | a| t| s~i~g~h~s in the h h u u s of d ~ ........ d.u.s.t. ......... s a t l e v r e g s o e l d r

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Date: 7/27/2025 2:29:00 AM
Great haiku and beautiful artistry. Love the last line much--- ' Dust salves old regret'. I am sure this will be placed high. All the Best.
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Date: 7/26/2025 4:30:00 PM
Captivating words and form, Sotto! Such creativity and depth expressed in just a few words. Amazing!
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Date: 7/26/2025 11:43:00 AM
WOW!!! What a creative/fun write and shapes you have here. Love the fun shape picture. "Good Luck" Have a lovely day/weekend writing away.....
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Date: 7/26/2025 7:45:00 AM
great creativity, expression of melancholy, enjoyed la "mise en page", thanks poet
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Date: 7/26/2025 5:45:00 AM
Dear Sotto,such a beautifully distilled reflection—just three lines, yet it carries the weight of memory, the ache of the body, and the quiet balm of time. I felt the sun’s grip, the whisper of wheat at day's end, and that final line—‘dust salves old regret’—lingered with me. Nature as healer, time as witness. Stunning work I hope you win the contest...hugs
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