The Hunter

The evening shadows
move through the branches to the top.
All through the winters'  night
the cold white crystals fall,
they seldom stop.

No rest on upper branch 
or lower limb you see.
but gently fall 
from limb to limb
to plant themselves on me.

And there they grow,
and others come to rest 
on cap and boot 
and upturned coat
till all in white i'm dressed.

And not a bird or beast 
within the wood 
could see or hear
so still there in the snow
beside the tree I stood.

But now it's time to go!
I'd watched old sol up in the sky
till winter's darkness 
drowned his bright red face;
I'd stood and watched him die.

Now, walking from the wood,
with only moon's pale light to see.
The crisp chill sound 
of winter's booted feet
speak mockingly to me.

For I must go!
Return to life's dull roll.
The dumb things of the wood 
I leave behind
all pity me I know!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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August 4, 2015 at 9:07 PM
JOSEPH, Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. **SKAT**
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August 7, 2015 at 11:38 AM
Thank you for choosing "The Hunter" as a featured poem. I appreciate the honor and am pleased that this is the second poem you have featured from my works. JHL
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July 8, 2015 at 3:24 PM
The Hunter is only one of the poems from my book "The Little Book of Writings" which also contains some prose and short stories. The poem was written after I went hunting near Cataract Ind. While I was hunting we got a light mist coming down on the snow where it froze making a crust. Walking out of the woods my feet "crunched" as they broke through the crust and the sentence " the crisp chill sound of winters booted feet" popped into my head and I wrote the poem around that sentence.
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July 7, 2015 at 1:48 PM
Joseph, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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July 7, 2015 at 2:10 PM
Thank you, It is only one of the poems from my book "The Little Book of Writings" I look forword to a fine relationship with Poetry Soup. I have already increased my membership to "premium" hoping to get more exposure. Joe
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