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The Hunted

A.W. Nutter The landscape lay virgin and white Warm breath fogging the morning air Resting during the day, hunting at night Hunger driving you from a secluded lair The sun revealing diamonds in the snow Making it hard to follow the deers progress Testing the tension of the homemade bow Survival depends on killing the defenseless Instincts scream, do not cross the field Demons are searching, they never rest Foolish child, you must stay concealed Shelter was provided deep in the forest The deer fail to notice death approaching As the arrow seeks out one creatures heart Falling to your knees you silently start praying God, capture this animals spirit as it departs Body of the conquered, provides fading heat Darkness fills your eyes, stars explode into view Nothingness follows, consciousness in retreat Life slowly returning, everything looks askew Your feet are dangling slightly off the ground Involuntarily shivering from lack of warmth The creaking of old timbers the only sound As your body gently sways back and forth Barn door swings open, true fear walks in Retrieving a steel bar from a dark corner Void of compassion as he listens to Satan This once loved man became a stranger A rough hand caresses your ribs and back Demon laughing as you try to move away Enjoying your agony waiting for the attack A mocking voice says, welcome home stray

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/19/2011 2:26:00 AM
Wowow!!.....very absolutely sweet!...love this poem of yours...!!.... 7!!
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Date: 2/28/2011 3:07:00 AM
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Date: 2/28/2011 3:06:00 AM
wow!!!!! love the hunter becomes his own hunt within nice !!! unless im reading it wrong
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Date: 2/13/2011 6:16:00 AM
Terrific reading Anthony. Love the stories your poetry gives us. Have a lovely Sunday....:)
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Date: 1/16/2011 6:51:00 AM
Great poem, Anthony! Well written! And thank you for your comment on "Heavy Rain" which I retitled into Constant Dark Rain to fit for the contest! Have a great week, Gert
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Date: 1/9/2011 12:26:00 AM
Hello Anthony, thanks for your title idea. This poem is indeed profound. It gave me lots to think about. Have a great 2011, Jancarl
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Date: 1/6/2011 6:05:00 PM
nice to catch up again with you Anthony, love this very profound poem, good luck in the new year. Harry
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Date: 12/31/2010 8:06:00 AM
Ahhh, MUCH clearer! The demons ie: the fallen man catches the boy hunter for though he the boy hunted deer, the demons ie the man hunted him..the devil's in the details! MUCH better! Light & Love
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Date: 12/31/2010 7:27:00 AM
Not exactly sure about this one but I know it is about abuse....Sara
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Date: 12/30/2010 5:28:00 AM
So much to ponder here...I believe it's about death and rebirth? It had the flavor of my verse Nightstalker no one much read it ;) too dark...I have only one suggestion [other than for ME to read this over & over] the word "backseat" seems inappropriate?"Nothing follows memories fading drumbeat or Nothing follows as memories fade in retreat"? Thanks for all your kind words and input in 2010.
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Date: 12/30/2010 3:58:00 AM
Wow! You are a more avid poet than me!!! Thanks for your comment on poem. I really appreciate it. http://bizplusnews.blogspot.com/2009/02/role-of-banks-in-nigerian-economy-1.html
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