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Form = Free Range Verse The Hunt Mans desire to hunt Testing skills from the beginning of time I had outfitted myself the day before With camouflage, and all the tools of the trade The excitement of catching my prey Outwitting my fellow hunter a plenty Tracking for hours and hours on end Off I went in search of the trophy In my jeep and down the hunters path Being not so familiar with the terrain I often backtracked, here and there Moving from one place to the other Silently and with anticipation Looking forward to bringing home my kills I had already a few scores to my name Now for the final The pièce de résistance That made the hunt all the worth while Bang! I got it Hunts Tomato sauce in Isle seven Oh how good the spaghetti dinner will be Hope she appreciates all the fine hunting you see I have done at Wal-Mart to make this evening show Candles and guitar in the shimmering moonlight The hunter so proud for being her shopping Knight!

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Date: 11/17/2016 5:32:00 PM
This would have been first place! lol, I loved your take on my theme. hugs
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Date: 11/17/2016 8:29:00 PM
Wait a sec, the correct answer is "All my poems would be first place!!" LOL
Date: 11/5/2016 6:00:00 PM
I love this, if you wouldn't have put the Hunt can I would have thought you were out there hunting for big game. Funny :-) I love spaghetti mmmmmmm...
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Date: 11/6/2016 12:29:00 AM
Thanks Eve, I was hunting for Turkey so I could come for thanksgiving!!!!
Date: 11/5/2016 9:56:00 AM
Oh look out chef boyardee ...lol...I love to do the shopping...there is usually some fair game in the produce section but be careful when you squeeze the melons.
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arthur vaso
Date: 11/6/2016 12:28:00 AM
LOL I tried, apparently you can get arrested for that!!
Date: 11/5/2016 9:02:00 AM
Bon Appetit, Killer...
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arthur vaso
Date: 11/6/2016 12:27:00 AM
Thanks Charlie! :)
Date: 11/5/2016 8:17:00 AM
Arturo, you maka me smile...and wanta pizza! ~ j
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Date: 11/6/2016 12:27:00 AM
I wanna a pizza now too!!! :)
Date: 11/5/2016 2:10:00 AM
Oh ..Who can resist a tin of tomato sauce,especially if the one who buys it is the one whose gonna cook ?: ) :)..Loved this.A fave.
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arthur vaso
Date: 11/6/2016 12:27:00 AM
You all say tin we all say can!!! :)
Date: 11/4/2016 10:46:00 PM
Very clever and oh so enjoyable. I'm amused, Arthur ... CayCay
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arthur vaso
Date: 11/6/2016 12:26:00 AM
If I made you smile I reached my objective!!! Thanks!!
Date: 11/4/2016 10:34:00 PM
Hi Arthur , I liked your take on the contest theme(if this for the contest) . Nevertheless,you penned a clever write and it just goes to show you are a poetical genius. The twist at the end was hilarious. A big seven:-) Alexis
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arthur vaso
Date: 11/6/2016 12:26:00 AM
If you are saying I am a genius, who am I to disagree??! Marry me! LOL
Date: 11/4/2016 10:09:00 PM
love the sense of humour
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Date: 11/6/2016 12:25:00 AM
Thank you! :)