The Hunt

Panicked tiny footprints, zigzag, sharp;
Each an arrow hungry for direction.
Across them, newer, the fully-fledged
Outlines of boots, strong, deep.

Ahead, the bootprints side by side,
Suddenly, decisively:  imagine the arms.
Further on still, the arrows stagger,
Stop, and fading blood reds the way. 

This is the tale the snow tells,
Along the ugly, thorn-jagged hedge.
Its record is brief, the warmer winds
Of oblivion will sweep in, soon, too soon.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Austin Avatar
October 5, 2011 at 1:40 PM
Good write. Maybe I'm a hypocrite, but shooting animals for sport sickens me. congrats on the selection. daver
James Avatar
November 30, 2010 at 12:20 PM
Thanks, Carol, you are always encouraging - it is appreciated!
James Avatar
November 30, 2010 at 1:20 AM
Mimi, why does not understanding make you proud?
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