The Hummingbird

“Beware…the beauty of the flower isn’t always as it seems. If you choose to partake of the sweetness of the nectar, your fate may be sealed” A hummingbird flew in my yard, ‘twas in the early morning hour, hovering o’er my garden blooms while searching for the perfect flower. Flying ‘round the bright array, he caught sight of a fresh pink daisy facing towards the morning sun; the flower’s essence drove him crazy. Coming near the fresh pink bloom whose dew dropped petals seemed quite rosy; nearer still he couldn’t resist the fragrance of this scented posie. Drawing close to flower’s bud, his senses like a sweet detector; placing beak into the bloom the bird began to sip the nectar. Motionless above the plant until his needs were fully sated; belly full he moved away not knowing that his time was fated. How was hummingbird to know the poison of this flower’s honey soon would lead to his demise, and thus his day would be less sunny. Satisfied the sleepy bird, into the morning sky, went flying, poisoned, and his fate was sealed, the hummingbird would soon be dying.
October 11, 2019
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Achilles Avatar
December 13, 2019 at 9:05 AM
I am fairly new to poetry soup- loved this and all your other work that I have had the pleasure now to read.
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December 21, 2019 at 7:15 AM
Thank you so much for taking the time to read my poetry, Julie, I appreciate it. John
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December 1, 2019 at 4:43 PM
Wow! As amazing as it seems! I’m your fan! ??
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December 1, 2019 at 6:43 PM
Thanks, Margarita, it pleases me that you enjoy my poetry, I’m humbled. John
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October 25, 2019 at 6:21 PM
John, congratulations on your great win. Hugs Eve
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October 26, 2019 at 6:08 AM
Thank you, Eve, I appreciate it, John
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October 22, 2019 at 11:20 AM
John congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this impressive poem and I love the quote too !
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October 22, 2019 at 4:18 PM
Thank you, Constance, and thanks for hosting the contest. Hugs, John
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October 20, 2019 at 5:35 PM
beautiful but so sad John I'd love to see one for real one day:-) hugs Jan xx
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October 21, 2019 at 5:02 AM
Thank you so much, Jan, I appreciate it. No hummingbirds on The Isle of Man? Hugs, John
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October 20, 2019 at 1:30 PM
- A beautiful poem, John - I've never seen a Hummingbird - Congratulations on your great win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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October 21, 2019 at 4:36 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise, I appreciate it. Hummingbirds are beautiful creatures. Hugs, John
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October 13, 2019 at 6:07 AM
Sad but beautifully written and I learnt something new today :-) x
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October 13, 2019 at 7:09 AM
Thank you, Elaine, I appreciate your thoughts and comments. Hugs, John
Deschler Avatar
October 12, 2019 at 1:18 PM
You leave the reader with much to think about in this poem... Very nicely penned John, and well rhymed too!
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October 12, 2019 at 1:40 PM
Thank you, Kelly, I appreciate your thoughts and comments. Hugs, John
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October 12, 2019 at 9:11 AM
Hi, John, I like your philosophical poem. Charlie
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October 12, 2019 at 9:45 AM
Thanks so much, Charlie, I'm glad you enjoyed this piece. John
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October 12, 2019 at 12:31 AM
Hello John … I didn't realize that there are plants with poison pollen. I suppose if the plant is not indigenous, the hummingbird wouldn't know of the danger - thank you for your insightful verse John - Lindsay
Gondolf Avatar
October 12, 2019 at 4:23 AM
Thanks, Lindsay, I appreciate your thoughts. There are many “flowers” out there waiting to “poison” us; we must always beware before sipping the nectar. John
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October 11, 2019 at 10:40 PM
Such a beautiful moment, when a hummingbird lingers from flower to flower. Finally finding the one that satisfies. Your thoughts hold so many emotions. This happens all the time in reality, the ending of your poem. One should be careful with whom they get close to. This so beautifully written and presented my dear friend. My best to you. ~ Brandy
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October 12, 2019 at 4:16 AM
Thank you, B, I appreciate your thoughts and comments. You are right, one must always weigh all the consequences before sipping the nectar. All the best my sweet friend. Hugs, John
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October 11, 2019 at 9:29 AM
great poem, john! so sad, though! you'd think the hummingbird would have the instincts to avoid such a situation...
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October 11, 2019 at 11:15 AM
Thank you, Ilene, I appreciate your thoughts and comments. You're right, this would probably never happen in the real world. All the best. Hugs, John
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October 11, 2019 at 7:31 AM
So sad... It's a beautiful poem, though. God bless you with many more, Gina
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October 11, 2019 at 7:42 AM
Thank you, Gina, I appreciate your comments. John
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October 11, 2019 at 6:56 AM
Beautiful and full of sadness. We never know what a day will bring. Great imagery!
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October 11, 2019 at 7:36 AM
Thank you, Kim, I appreciate your thoughts and comments. Hugs, John
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