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The Hummingbird

“Beware…the beauty of the flower isn’t always as it seems. If you choose to partake of the sweetness of the nectar, your fate may be sealed” A hummingbird flew in my yard, ‘twas in the early morning hour, hovering o’er my garden blooms while searching for the perfect flower. Flying ‘round the bright array, he caught sight of a fresh pink daisy facing towards the morning sun; the flower’s essence drove him crazy. Coming near the fresh pink bloom whose dew dropped petals seemed quite rosy; nearer still he couldn’t resist the fragrance of this scented posie. Drawing close to flower’s bud, his senses like a sweet detector; placing beak into the bloom the bird began to sip the nectar. Motionless above the plant until his needs were fully sated; belly full he moved away not knowing that his time was fated. How was hummingbird to know the poison of this flower’s honey soon would lead to his demise, and thus his day would be less sunny. Satisfied the sleepy bird, into the morning sky, went flying, poisoned, and his fate was sealed, the hummingbird would soon be dying.
October 11, 2019

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Date: 12/13/2019 9:05:00 AM
I am fairly new to poetry soup- loved this and all your other work that I have had the pleasure now to read.
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John Gondolf
Date: 12/21/2019 7:15:00 AM
Thank you so much for taking the time to read my poetry, Julie, I appreciate it. John
Date: 12/1/2019 4:43:00 PM
Wow! As amazing as it seems! I’m your fan! ??
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John Gondolf
Date: 12/1/2019 6:43:00 PM
Thanks, Margarita, it pleases me that you enjoy my poetry, I’m humbled. John
Date: 10/25/2019 6:21:00 PM
John, congratulations on your great win. Hugs Eve
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John Gondolf
Date: 10/26/2019 6:08:00 AM
Thank you, Eve, I appreciate it, John
Date: 10/22/2019 11:20:00 AM
John congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this impressive poem and I love the quote too !
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John Gondolf
Date: 10/22/2019 4:18:00 PM
Thank you, Constance, and thanks for hosting the contest. Hugs, John
Date: 10/20/2019 5:35:00 PM
beautiful but so sad John I'd love to see one for real one day:-) hugs Jan xx
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John Gondolf
Date: 10/21/2019 5:02:00 AM
Thank you so much, Jan, I appreciate it. No hummingbirds on The Isle of Man? Hugs, John
Date: 10/20/2019 1:30:00 PM
- A beautiful poem, John - I've never seen a Hummingbird - Congratulations on your great win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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John Gondolf
Date: 10/21/2019 4:36:00 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise, I appreciate it. Hummingbirds are beautiful creatures. Hugs, John
Date: 10/13/2019 6:07:00 AM
Sad but beautifully written and I learnt something new today :-) x
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John Gondolf
Date: 10/13/2019 7:09:00 AM
Thank you, Elaine, I appreciate your thoughts and comments. Hugs, John
Date: 10/12/2019 1:18:00 PM
You leave the reader with much to think about in this poem... Very nicely penned John, and well rhymed too!
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John Gondolf
Date: 10/12/2019 1:40:00 PM
Thank you, Kelly, I appreciate your thoughts and comments. Hugs, John
Date: 10/12/2019 9:11:00 AM
Hi, John, I like your philosophical poem. Charlie
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John Gondolf
Date: 10/12/2019 9:45:00 AM
Thanks so much, Charlie, I'm glad you enjoyed this piece. John
Date: 10/12/2019 12:31:00 AM
Hello John … I didn't realize that there are plants with poison pollen. I suppose if the plant is not indigenous, the hummingbird wouldn't know of the danger - thank you for your insightful verse John - Lindsay
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John Gondolf
Date: 10/12/2019 4:23:00 AM
Thanks, Lindsay, I appreciate your thoughts. There are many “flowers” out there waiting to “poison” us; we must always beware before sipping the nectar. John
Date: 10/11/2019 10:40:00 PM
Such a beautiful moment, when a hummingbird lingers from flower to flower. Finally finding the one that satisfies. Your thoughts hold so many emotions. This happens all the time in reality, the ending of your poem. One should be careful with whom they get close to. This so beautifully written and presented my dear friend. My best to you. ~ Brandy
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John Gondolf
Date: 10/12/2019 4:16:00 AM
Thank you, B, I appreciate your thoughts and comments. You are right, one must always weigh all the consequences before sipping the nectar. All the best my sweet friend. Hugs, John
Date: 10/11/2019 9:29:00 AM
great poem, john! so sad, though! you'd think the hummingbird would have the instincts to avoid such a situation...
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John Gondolf
Date: 10/11/2019 11:15:00 AM
Thank you, Ilene, I appreciate your thoughts and comments. You're right, this would probably never happen in the real world. All the best. Hugs, John
Date: 10/11/2019 7:31:00 AM
So sad... It's a beautiful poem, though. God bless you with many more, Gina
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John Gondolf
Date: 10/11/2019 7:42:00 AM
Thank you, Gina, I appreciate your comments. John
Date: 10/11/2019 6:56:00 AM
Beautiful and full of sadness. We never know what a day will bring. Great imagery!
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John Gondolf
Date: 10/11/2019 7:36:00 AM
Thank you, Kim, I appreciate your thoughts and comments. Hugs, John

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