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The House That Heard Us Once

Thee crumbling walls can’t hear my song, Though once they rang with joy and cries— Now silence stays the whole day long. My sisters’ love, both soft and strong, Lit up the dusk like fireflies. The crumbling walls can’t hear my song. My brothers helped me along, With quiet nods and whispered wise— Now silence stays the whole day long. Where roses bloomed and deer would throng, Now other homes and fences rise. The crumbling walls can’t hear my song. Back then, each room would hum with throng— Mom’s warmth, Dad’s calm, and lullabies. Now silence stays the whole day long. Yet memory’s roots still hold me strong, Though time and weather blur the ties. The crumbling walls can’t hear my song— Now silence stays the whole day long.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025




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Date: 6/18/2025 12:22:00 PM
Enjoyed this so much Jay, memories are priceless
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Date: 6/18/2025 5:04:00 AM
I can so well relate to your feelings. Once the house was vibrant with sound, now it lies silent. The once strong walls are now crumbling.
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Date: 6/17/2025 11:13:00 AM
Charming poems, Jay, expressing a desire for the house to be revitalized.
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Date: 6/16/2025 4:50:00 PM
The yearning for the house to live again is palpable and so real. Nice work!
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Date: 6/16/2025 12:31:00 PM
- ... the time that once made many sounds ... gone forever ... a melaconic poem, Jay - hugs
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