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The house of winds and waters

Two emerald coasts frame the cape of the ancient pirates Among its smooth greyish white rocks cedar trees being grown faintly within the centuries their volume curved exposing to exogenous powers their lawless shadow, a shelter under the strong Mediterranean sun. North wind’s continuous touch intercepts worries that being fired shifts them far to the mountainous villages until their thin structure accedes to the hasty clouds becomes one with the view; thoughts, cliffs, sun and sky. Hair disheveled, blown towards all directions fragments of sand all over the skin. Morning dreams lave in the water edge dazzling crystal surface of the sea hurts the eyes Aqua iridescences invite to be integrated A deep breath, the playful buoyance and I caress the wave’s ripples being embossed on the fine pearly sand of the untrodden seabed, pure light and eternal time, my underwater kingdom lasts as my longest breath. * A poem inspired by the place "Mikri Vigla" in Naxos island, Cyclades Greece.

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Date: 10/10/2017 2:28:00 PM
Thank you all so much! I was away for some months and when I came back to PoetrySoup, all your kind and encouraging comments below my poem, made me very happy!
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Date: 8/18/2017 6:24:00 AM
Amazing write, full of awesome imagery..
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Date: 7/24/2017 3:33:00 AM
This poem is wonderful May. Exotic indeed! Congratulations on a well deserved win! : ) Aloha, Connie
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Date: 7/23/2017 5:03:00 PM
An exquisite write about a wondrous place! I adore your phrasing and your whimsical wording and imagery ... congratulations on a well-deserved placement, OM! :-)
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Date: 7/23/2017 6:32:00 AM
Great word choices take the reader on a journey to this exotic place. Well written, May.
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Date: 7/22/2017 8:43:00 PM
I have always wanted to go to Greece, now you have made me want to go more! Please do enter my next contest & if you would like editing assistance & advice about where to send your work to be published just soup mail me. Congrad's Light & Love Debbie
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Date: 10/10/2017 2:35:00 PM
Dear Debbie, your contest theme was very inspiring to me, as much as the country I live, Greece! You are very very welcome to come any time you like! Thank you for these creative poetic moments, I really enjoyed the participation to your contest! And nice to meet you in the community! My warmest greetings!
Date: 7/11/2017 5:49:00 AM
Lovely, Ordinary May. Something tells me that the poems that will follow this one will be anything but "ordinary," as well. Give us more.
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Date: 7/10/2017 8:00:00 AM
Very beautiful this is. I love the ending too :)
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