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The House

The House
The house protects me from the freezing cold It keeps me warm by breathing its warm air on me In return it asks clean windows and polished floors They say a man’s home is his castle, but it’s really the woman Who rips up the old carpet, who remodels the kitchen and puts prose on the kitchen wall that says: “For Health and family, for good food and fun, For staying young while growing old We give Thee thanks.”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/16/2016 11:19:00 PM
James Douglas, creative and well done. Thank you for sharing. **SKAT**
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Date: 5/14/2016 3:17:00 PM
JAMES D, Fantastic writing, glad to read your poem. ~Love LINDA~
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Date: 2/10/2010 3:25:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup James. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/9/2010 8:04:00 PM
Hello There! Nice write. thanks for sharing this lovely prayer. Welcome here to poetrysoup. I'm sure you will find a warm welcome as I did. Have a great day! Scarlett
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Date: 2/9/2010 7:05:00 PM
A nice prayer.........welcome to the Soup!
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