the horse is dead dismount

my husband and I used to argue
weeks after a verbal agreement should have been over
we were silly about it
heckling and harassing each other
over things that do not matter
ridiculously egging and goading

my husband told me a story about a soldier
the soldier kept beating his horse after it had died
his commanding officer said “the horse is dead, dismount”.

now when the argument reaches a silly stage
one of us yells “the horse is dead, dismount”
this has worked to end our idiocy for the last fifty years.

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Date: 9/29/2024 4:27:00 AM
Dear Caren, what great advice to all couples and a well inked poem that deserves POTD. Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Date: 9/28/2024 3:59:00 PM
Hello Caren, congratulations on your POTD. this is a great way to end an argument. It works for you. Hugs. /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/29/2024 9:04:00 AM
Hello Caren, When there is an argument here, i just stay silent. That way the person is arguing by themselves.. Hugs. /Darlene/
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 9/28/2024 11:46:00 PM
thank you Darlene I appreciate it
Date: 9/27/2024 11:33:00 PM
Your engrossing tale caused chuckles, Caren. Love it! Congratulations on POTD. :)
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 9/28/2024 11:47:00 PM
thank you Evelyn
Date: 9/27/2024 3:54:00 PM
Enjoyed your story, Caren - very wise! Congratulations on POTD.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 9/28/2024 11:47:00 PM
thank you Malabika
Date: 9/27/2024 1:58:00 PM
Caren, what insight into life. Whatever works. Why torment Over nothing. Congratulations on Your POTD.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 9/28/2024 11:48:00 PM
thank you RJ
Date: 9/27/2024 11:33:00 AM
Unversal thwarted by genius! We pass a "sorry" engraved rock back and forth, breaks the chilly ice. POTD just for the content. Thanks, CK. :o))
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 9/28/2024 11:48:00 PM
thank you Arlo
Date: 9/27/2024 11:29:00 AM
Dear Caren, this story about what the soldier said makes sense in many ways. Your thoughts bring a smile, my dear friend. Congratulations on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 9/28/2024 11:50:00 PM
Thank you Brandy
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 9/28/2024 11:50:00 PM
Thank you Brandy
Date: 9/27/2024 10:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading your fun/true write. More people should say, “the horse is dead, dismount.” FAV for me. Have a blessed day/weekend writing away...............
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 9/28/2024 11:51:00 PM
thank you Paula - it has worked for us since 71 when we got married.
Date: 9/27/2024 6:28:00 AM
So glad this was POTD! Congratulations!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 9/28/2024 11:52:00 PM
thank you Kim
Date: 9/27/2024 6:19:00 AM
Love it, and I bet it works like a charm! Congratulations on POTD :))) xomo!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 9/28/2024 11:54:00 PM
thank you Maureen
Date: 9/27/2024 5:47:00 AM
Caren, I enjoyed this one, congratulations on POTD.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 9/28/2024 11:55:00 PM
thank youy Tania
Date: 9/27/2024 5:17:00 AM
I enjoyed reading this, very meaningful I thought, Well done on potd Caren
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 9/28/2024 11:54:00 PM
thank you Clive
Date: 9/27/2024 5:07:00 AM
Whatever works, Caren. It's better than burying a hatchet! Congratulations on your potd.
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Date: 9/27/2024 4:25:00 AM
lol love this! Congrats on potd!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 9/28/2024 11:55:00 PM
thank you Karen
Date: 9/27/2024 1:02:00 AM
Great POTD & wise words Caren!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 9/28/2024 11:53:00 PM
thank you Martin
Date: 9/27/2024 12:32:00 AM
You're not alone Caren, congratulations to you on the honour of POTD. Tom
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 9/28/2024 11:53:00 PM
thank you Tom
Date: 9/25/2024 3:45:00 PM
What, you argue with a judge?
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 9/28/2024 11:57:00 PM
if I had to I would
Date: 9/25/2024 2:28:00 PM
what a great way to end an argument, caren!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 9/28/2024 11:52:00 PM
thank you Ilene. It works for us.
Date: 9/25/2024 1:22:00 PM
I love this! A fave! We usuallyrealize how dumb our arguments were many years later.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 9/28/2024 11:56:00 PM
thank you Kim
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