The Homefront

As mother watched
a ball rolled on friendly sand,
red and white and blue and yellow,
through a thoughtful tearful haze

a forest of blurred legs
in parched pursuit -

shovels and pails dug forts,
they buried her feet in its walls
     laughing...

While a mortar round struck
    in Pacific sand
olive drab entrenching tools
dug a hole to hide -
they buried their friends
in its walls; crying...

Back home, stars of Gold
wept on windows where
    tracks of tears
traced so much more
     than raindrops.

Mothers left hugging memories
-wishing a kiss and band aid 
could heal the wound
       of a broken heart

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Date: 5/27/2024 8:38:00 PM
Love this contrast of the sand with 'the beach.' ... esp. apropos for Memorial Day. Faith and Strength, Gershon
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Date: 5/25/2024 9:59:00 AM
I like how your poem effectively uses contrast and imagery to explore the themes of innocence, war, and maternal grief. It evokes strong emotions and provides a poignant commentary on the impact of war on families, particularly mothers. Through its vivid portrayal of contrasting scenes, the poem underscores the enduring pain of loss and the helplessness felt by those left behind.
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Date: 5/25/2024 6:33:00 AM
Sad. A good one for Memorial Day. Especially poignant, the final verse. Have a good weekend, dear Craig.
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