The Hollow Nature of Being

WALL I:

 
inside an empty room lies an empty box
and in that box is a four walled inside room within---
on each of the four walls is a mirror reflecting
the deep desertion of the next
and distant within each wall is another
echoing & spiraling back into infinite repetition
with nothing or no one except the physical entities
bearing back upon each other.

                             
WALL II:

 
an empty room in an empty house
the house itself has no physical attributes because it
was built in a barren field---
there are no animals, no trees,
no beings of any kind
roaming around the house whose image cannot be
imagined,
at best, know that this house in fact
“housed” the room in question,
as any house might any room.

 
WALL III:


such a barren field stretches to all four corners
carrying itself out beyond the periphery
curling back in on the other side,
and walking in any direction will bring one back to the
beginning---
the barren field that reveals the empty house that
encapsulates the empty room is the most integral point of
reference within the endless flat plain of grass.
 

WALL IV:

 
endless flat plains of grass flowing out in all directions covering
the circumference of the area around the empty house residing in
the middle of the plain wherein
the inside of the empty house holds the
empty room & in the
room,
the four mirrored walls reveal only the replication of the
others,
spiraling into infinite repetition---
there is no feeling
no sound
no communication of any kind
woven with the thread of human fiber.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 9/23/2011 6:58:00 PM
Happy weekend I enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today Andrew. Love, Carol
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