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The Hill

the hill

sparked by fall's bright hues. . .

nightfall's sudden chill


For Brian Strand's H I - K U Poetry Contest

autumnhaiku

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John Watt

December 31, 2020 at 11:23 AM

Great imagery and a win with Brian, well done!

Brian Strand

December 29, 2020 at 11:56 AM

Andrea you wonder(elsewhere) what appeals to me ..this style of yours is it... I gave it a podium Ist...go figure...as you say across the pond.Blessings for 2021 ..stay creative.

Andrea Dietrich

December 30, 2020 at 12:09 PM

I will never stop trying to figure things out. haha. Thanks very much for my win with this one, Brian.

Janice Canerdy

November 10, 2020 at 4:05 PM

Lovely WINNING piece, Andrea. Janice

Newton Ranaweera

November 9, 2020 at 2:40 PM

Congratulations, Andrea, on your 1st place win, for your excellent haiku!!

John Watt

November 9, 2020 at 11:16 AM

Well look who won first place! Nicely done, my hearty congratulations ~ John

L Milton Hankins

November 9, 2020 at 10:42 AM

Congratulations on your win. Nice work!

Linda Alice Fowler

November 9, 2020 at 7:29 AM

Lovely Andrea. Congratulations on the win! Linda

Constance La France

November 9, 2020 at 3:52 AM

Andrea, congratulations on your win in Brian's H I - K U contest with this excellent haiku _Constance

Alexis Y.

November 9, 2020 at 1:30 AM

WoW! Andrea, Stellar imagery in this well written piece. Congratulations on your top win:-) Alexis

Jo Chamberlain

November 9, 2020 at 12:58 AM

Congratulations on your winning placement :-)

Beautiful Scars

April 3, 2016 at 12:26 PM

Andrea, congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo

Timothy Hicks

April 2, 2016 at 8:25 PM

I'm assuming you're having trouble with the pelican picture? Lol. That was the first pelican I ever saw in Florida ... I got really lucky catching him in mid-flight like that.

Paul Callus

April 2, 2016 at 4:26 PM

You tempt with lovely warm imagery, Andrea...and then the chilly change! Congrats on a fine win which could easily have climbed up some more rungs! // paul

M Asim Nehal

April 1, 2016 at 1:47 PM

Awesome imagery and nice haiku...Loved it.

Sandra Haight

April 1, 2016 at 8:07 AM

Lovely imagery, Andrea. One can feel the sudden transition. Congrats on your fine placement. Hugs, Sandra

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

April 1, 2016 at 2:22 AM

Congrats on ur superb win with this lovely write Andrea..

Sara Kendrick

March 31, 2016 at 4:08 PM

Reads like a winner..Way to go..Beautiful photo to go with the work or a beautiful photo from which to spring with a wonderful work..Thanks for the visit to my blog..Sara

Teddy Kimathi

March 31, 2016 at 5:44 AM

That portrait is a true impression of how Heaven looks like!!! Congrats Andrea, for your WIN in the contest!!! ;-)

Jan Allison

March 31, 2016 at 5:36 AM

Congrats on your win Andrea:-) hugs Jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong

March 31, 2016 at 3:43 AM

Back to give you congratulations on your placement Andrea! Boy he judged this fast!

Timothy Hicks

March 31, 2016 at 3:23 AM

Congrats Andrea! Ahhhh the splash of vibrant color before nightfall. Engrossing haiku that captures both sight and feel.

Connie Marcum Wong

March 31, 2016 at 3:17 AM

Ahhhh makes me long for autumn again. I remember when I used to enjoy two autumns a year because I flew down under. Cool haiku Andre! G L in the contest, but this hardly needs any. ; )