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The Hide

Recording, memories in my mind Blinking, red dots in time to a beat Grounding, the road under my feet Walking, daring to see again when Today, demands are staring again Calling, in all directions a plan. To be. Everything that calls within Me. Hidden, aWay memories of mine Sinking, deep like swimming blind Reaching, air as I touch the Divine Everywhere, they call to my mind. The Hide. aWay is too. Find...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/19/2009 10:32:00 PM
Interesting write, a visual tour full of whipping word-play...."Deep like swimming blind"....... GREAT write.......:JP)
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Date: 7/5/2009 1:23:00 PM
I like the last stanza.Very good poetry.Ur one of the best.I can actualy understand this while at the same time its deep.
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Date: 7/5/2009 1:11:00 PM
awwwwww don't hide...say BOOOOOOOOO! make the rest hide from you if there has to be a hide it should be you..you are to precious! Light & Love
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