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The Heavens, the Stars, the Moon and Our Love

Alluring the whispers, a warm summer breeze Floating the heavens, caressing the sky Counting each star, midst the evergreen trees Lost in the glow as the moon passes by Sharing a kiss that a shadow conceals Holding each other neath wonders above Feeling our heartbeats as evening reveals The heavens, the stars, the moon and our love

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 11/3/2016 12:01:00 PM
Love the rhyme, and the flow of this piece, just so romantic, love the celestial references, always invokes the divine part of love. A7
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Date: 11/2/2016 2:02:00 PM
This is indeed beautiful!!!
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Chris Green
Date: 11/2/2016 2:54:00 PM
Thank you Charmaine. I am happy you think so.
Date: 11/2/2016 1:11:00 PM
Very comforting! Beautifully written :)
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Chris Green
Date: 11/2/2016 1:41:00 PM
Thank you for your always kind words Heidi.
Date: 11/2/2016 12:22:00 PM
Very beautiful and romantic Chris.
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Chris Green
Date: 11/2/2016 12:43:00 PM
Thank you Tim for your constant support

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