The Heat Is Scalding

the heat is scalding burning the skin to bright red storms on horizon Russell Sivey

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Kerry Singleton

Date: 7/20/2012 10:10:00 PM

Oh yes nothing like a good storm to cool things down, reminds me of long hot summer days & welcoming the storm with arms open wide, what a great little write Russell :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/19/2012 5:01:00 PM

I really like the way the last line relates to the first two!

Kim Merryman

Date: 7/19/2012 4:37:00 PM

Good haiku, Russell. Hope you can find a way to cool off. Summer is not my favorite time of year because of the heat. Love, KIm

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/19/2012 4:28:00 PM

I hope that you get some rain for it sounds like you need it..We had rain just a little while ago..It helps so much..Thanks for stopping by..Doris called herself and she sounded rough but she was wanting to talk to us..Sara