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The Heart of the Ocean

Starring down the iron, In A belivient disorder, My eyes begin to twitch, My lips begin to quiver Uttering: ICE~BURG Ahead As my heart turns cold, my Body lies stiff ignoring the Walls that are about to Wash under~feet. Chasing these cold n' dark Hall~ways i am no longer, Drowning in fear, as the Light begins to dim, closing Eyes to pray, begging for life to abort ship, as i look to see my love is not lost, for it is the heart of the ocean i long to spare my life for tru~loves promise.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/12/2012 6:39:00 PM
Brilliant Carma. Sweet write. I enjoyed the read. Love, Khalid
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Carma Sanderson
Date: 9/17/2012 6:50:00 PM
thank you khalid for the time to read glad you enjoyed it. hugs
Date: 9/12/2012 12:59:00 PM
Another awesome one! Always, Laura
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Carma Sanderson
Date: 9/12/2012 5:57:00 PM
thank you laura always!
Date: 9/12/2012 7:56:00 AM
sweet words Carma,great write of love promise
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Carma Sanderson
Date: 9/12/2012 5:56:00 PM
these are the words i speak for you in love and promise to your heart.
Date: 9/12/2012 6:59:00 AM
Good description. Never lose faith in love. Lovely and well written. xoxo love Anne-Lise :)
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Carma Sanderson
Date: 9/12/2012 5:54:00 PM
thank you anne~lise my faith will always carry on.

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